Reviews for Of the River and the Sea
Arcami chapter 4 . 1/31/2015
Is it Kisame or Zabuzza that saw her?
llat-2 chapter 4 . 1/30/2015
Kisame or Mei Terumi perhaps?
Enbi chapter 4 . 1/30/2015
Is it weird that I like this side of your character? You've shown a side of brutality without making it seem forced. Nice job
it me chapter 3 . 1/28/2015
There are only three chapters and I need more! D: This really tickled my interests and I hope that you will keep up the great work that you are doing!

Much Love

nonhosonno chapter 1 . 1/25/2015
Mmmm...this seems to be promising, and I really like the fact that she's not going to be yet another oc born and raised in Konoha, makes thing more interesting ) hope to see Kisame soon (love that guy!), is it too much for me to hope for him to make an appearance in the next chapter? XD looking forward to your next update, ciao
Enbi chapter 2 . 1/26/2015
Haha this is really funny! Your OC is interesting, and I'm excited to see more of her.
The Plague Doctor chapter 2 . 1/26/2015
Wow, this chapter was great! I'm really looking forward to this story; can't wait for more ;P
kunt-destroyer420 chapter 1 . 1/26/2015
Read the section in the ToS on self inserts. Nobody likes them BTW.
Apocalyptica-sama chapter 1 . 1/25/2015
Awesome profile that you?
Good luck with a self insert story. I see you have it tagged as "humor", and trust could have an absurd amount of OCs, cliches, overpowered characters and other plot devices that most readers hate, but as long as you keep it funny you will have a good chance for success.
I'm guessing you will have her have some sort of relationship with Kisame? Why else would you tag him? And seriously...OC/Kisame is an extremely odd pairing, so seriously...good luck if you do decide to go with that. If you are actually planning for NaruOC, as long as you don't make Naruto a complete retard/weakling you have a good chance for an awesome pairing if you develop your own character well enough. Plus, the majority of the readers would prefer to read about Naruto and an OC than one with anyone else and review about it.
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