I really didn't like the abrupt change to harry being at hogwarts. it ruined it for me.

This was a really good story, and I hope you return to it, one day.

I'm so glad you summarised the rest of the story. The mix of summaries and scenes works surprisingly well

Enjoyed your HP/A crossovers, thanks for giving us closure with your outlines.
Thanks for having posted and hope you have found a job that you like and can tell dunderheads how you feel about them.

What a fucking let down. Clint/Natasha pairing was bad anyway, why would you feel disappointed when you learned he has a wife? You should've went for Harry/Natasha, there weren't that much age difference and she didn't treat him like a son anyway. Too bad.

Continuing?

Loki's good, the way he's written...but Pat Briggs writes Coyote far, far better. And Coyote is native to North America..., hmmmm...well, how about that. Now, if I can just get this writer to grab that bun bun and run with it...

Overall, it's an interesting story and concept. Any reader could 100% tell you were trying to speed up the story to outpace your loss of interest in it, though. Multiple years passing works if there are a selection of flashbacks to point to relationship building, and it's tough with how quickly you paced events to be on some sort of MCU timeline.

Oh well. Another one for the shelves of mediocrity.

I would have pointed out that Natasha to Custody of Harry after Vernon tried to Kill Harry but the the boys magic acted out to protect him so as a result the Black Widow is his Guardian/Foster Mother. And as for Harry with the way Thor was looking at Harry as thou He resembles Loki for which may be he does Thus maybe Loki was Potter for a time but the Two parts were never reunited considering The Kings Cross Train Station Scene with the Potter's.

But I do hope that at some point Harry with retrieve is inheritance From Gringotts and I do hope that it is in lockdown to avoid theft. Because I do not trust the British Magicals.

Plus it would be something if Natasha looked a lot like Lily. Plus it would he something they also did a DNA and magical inheritance/ heritage Test on both of them and it turns out
they are distantly related. Plus show That Natasha would be a better Guardian and thus transfer the Bloodwards over to Natasha from Petunia. Especially when you consider all of the abuse and neglect and the fact that at least Vernon if not Petunia were planning on killing Harry.

It looks like a good story
I will remind you fanfiction is rewritting the universe the way you want it to be.
I mean if you just followed canon you might as well buy the book or watch the movie.
Enjoyed it.

"So, Harry Potter, you were scheduled to pass away today?"
'Just temporarily.'
'I got better?'
'Mom and

Thank you for posting this summary. I am disappointed you didn't finish writing the full story, but I do appreciate you giving the summary of how it ends. And it's a great ending. You're a good writer, too. So don't stop!

This was such a good story, it's a shame you have given up on it. I'd have liked a bit more info from the HP stories running in parallel to the Avengers story, and perhaps a bit more interaction between harry & natasha to round out their relationship but I liked how you covered a lot of time with brief explanations. I think your kick-ass harry is a great invention and just what is needed in the HPverse. I'm just amazed how fantastically well you write in a language that is not your first language. It puts all us tongue tied Brits to shame.

I realise it would spoil your story if you took this line, but isn't it very odd that they are training a CHILD to go on ops for them? Shouldn't they ship him off to school and give him counselling for being exposed to crime and killing at a young age? Amoral or what?