Вау! Вы очень серьёзно и внимательно подошли к написанию этой истории. Я привыкла к Гарри Поттеру, поэтому не понимала, насколько недопустимыми были действия Хагрида. Я имею в виду, вы, написали всю сцену очень психологично и реалистично, сохраняя характер героев, но все же я не чувствую, что у Гарри был иной выбор(например, Хогвартс). Это интересно.
Хочу сказать, что повод, который вы предоставили для знакомства ваших главных героев очень внятный и лёгкий. Даже дальнейшее воспитание написано с заботой. Спасибо)

it's demigod not semigod

Why does everyone feel the need to make Harry short?

Umm what? You do realize that Green Arrow is part of a totally different universe right?

Where are they in the Marvel timeline? Is Natasha part of SHIELD yet? If so then why the hell are they employing a little kid to do assassinations for them?

You REALLY need a beta

I'm sorry but this is actually funny stuff. I love the mom/son relationship thing.

okay idk if this was an intentional reference but the whole thing with natasha saying how things can’t be simply fixed with a snap of a finger kinda had me dying a little inside bc of infinity war

but also this is a fantastic story so far and i love it

So eleven year old Harry knows he's a badass, and doesn't give a toss if someone calls him kid or midget. But fourteen year old Harry gets defensive and petulant? Just makes him seem even more a child. Liked the younger version better.

This was fantastic and I wish your muse had stuck around to allow you to finish but I am SO SO glad you left us this last chapter :) I hope you get inspired to return to this fandom again soon because your writing is captivating :)

not bad, though a bit vage on harrys skill set, to bad you stopprd when the story got good but at least you gave us a summary. but what a falcon has to do with deheading voldemort ill never know, nor understand why wizards would follow hydra

Niceee

Really enjoyed the read

Miss ShunKickShunKers,

Another good story that will never be fully written. So sad.

Still, I can understand your disappointment with the movies. I've only seen a few, and the series seem to go down hill rather rapidly.

Thank you, once again, for sharing your outline with us. I'm really glad that you have.

May you have other, interesting stories to write. I like the way that your mind works. Especially using the characters and building your own plot.

Cheers and Good Fortune,
Scott Peimann

Thank you again for at least showing us the ending. I liked your stiry this far and am pleased with the ending. If you find the time I would love to read the finished version