You did amazing! Please write that four dont cheat on her and make a little romantic, can you?!

Ah, yes, he can be a very sneaky bastard.
He'll be an awesome boyfriend soon :D
Leigh

I like the ending... XD
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8:8 - Butterfly!

Creeping up on Tris while she's unzipping her dress, eh Tobias? ;) ;)

Hahaha haha hahaha Tobias you little pervert XD. I was like "is he going to keep watching?!" Lol I loved this.