Reviews for Rise of the Chosen One |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A truly wonderful story from start to finish. I really admire that you didn't make Amira solve all of Anakins problems storywise or emotionally and that she wasn't some perfect being inserted into the story. She and Anakin were a foil to each other in many ways and you highlighted their growth together as individuals, and as love interests, excellently. Both of them and their progress felt very natural and it is almost a shame that it's simply fanfiction. I also want to point out that i believe that you handled the consequences for their actions very well and in a believable way. I think it would be interesting to see a sequel one day but the story ended in an excellent spot. Thank you for writing. |
![]() ![]() That was very disappointing. |
![]() ![]() Fantastic chapter! |
![]() ![]() Fantastic story! |
![]() ![]() Boring. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how Anakin was more motivated to end Sidious by the promise of getting some, than by savings billions of lives. Mans got his priorities straight. |
![]() ![]() ![]() a part of me is really curious of what the story could possibly be for the next trilogy cuz most of it was based off of Luke and Leia and Han |
![]() ![]() ![]() i feel this was 100% out of pocket not only for the storylines path but it is ooc for the anakin you spent 1.5 books writing. and i can tell by your childish AN that you know it and its done just to shock people at your evil genious. but your not its just sad. i expected better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the amount of filler is ubsured all the self thoughts and narriation over what to do and why im feeling this way that. it was bad in the last book also. this chapter is basically all filler, rehashed thoughts from book 1. needs better pacing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm warm |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy moly, i though he wouldyou got me there! im cryin |
![]() ![]() ![]() no, you bloody pale wrinkled butt I would've cried, if there was alternative universe wherr they did this this chapter is makin cry |
![]() ![]() ![]() oni wan tricked him lolll, smart move thou 0 NO AUTHOR RUN |
![]() ![]() ![]() no, screw the code "mira" i just died oh no :0 |
![]() ![]() ![]() "IF HE ONLY KNEW" if you don't want to keep him, i will man, palps is a cabron |