Reviews for James Potter and the Blue Unicorn |
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![]() ![]() Well, well, I do fel as if I am rading the is quite amazing but confusing. I want to read more, i want to stretch it out, for more enjoyment. Thank the Sages there are more chapters! |
![]() ![]() Wow, you write very well. I always have a lot of respect for anyone who can write a decent Sorting Song. Ok on to more. |
![]() ![]() I know this story has been out for awile but I've just got around to reading it. I loved the song. I haveing, no rhymindg talent, respect anyone w/ the brains to do it. I not sure whether this was published before the whole Lily Evans thing came out or what? It would be quite convenient for Katie to be named Evans. So maybe I ought to go read the rest. |
![]() ![]() I was real happy to see you made Sinistra a girl. SOOOO many people get it wrong and it makes me mad. This chapter was really great. The pumkin juice thing and the conversation about the wedding were nice. It's so cute they're in love already. I have to confess something. This is my first real MWPP story. For some reason I have never read one. Just stories that mention them like your Back To The Future. I must say, I'm finding it quite enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() OMG! Lily can predict the future. Oh, There goes my whole Katie adopting Lily theory. I had it all planed out in my head. Pooh! Am I wrong or was Sirius being a little mean to Remus while he was lieing...well it was still mean. Is that a Vampire that teacher has? |
![]() ![]() OHHH, I can't wait to find out what the Blue Unicorn is. Snape and Lily under the mistletoe. Can we say "GROSS". James wants to sleep in the same room as Lily. Hoe sweet. But I can't believe she wants to sleep in the rat's bed. Never mind that she doesn't yet know he's a rat physically and figuratively. Or the fact that he hasn't actually done those things yet. |
![]() ![]() Firstly, I don't care what you say, Lily & James Are In Love! Sirius sure faints alot in your fics. Invisibilty withdraws, I know them well! |
![]() ![]() Let me get all my exclamations out of the way. OHHH those potions. Who are they going to bring back to life? And didn't they say that it'd already been like a month and they needed to hurry. Maybe I'm wrong, memoir fails me. FRENCH! I love Fench. To bad I suck at it. Lastly, just when I was starting to complain that you were being mean to the Hufflepuffs, you let them win. YAY! |
![]() ![]() Only one more chapter till I know all. I loved Woods' commentary. And that "gentically modified rat-type creature" line was rich. And I wonder why the character named Smith got to be so perfect? :) |
![]() ![]() WOW! I'm speechless! You, sir, are a genius! |
![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY! However, I do NOT NOT NOT NOT NOT NOT (trying to get my point across) think that ""Evans"" is Lilys name nor should be! Disses those that say it is hers! It's UGLY! HER NAME IS NOT LILY EVANS! Don't listen to them! It never mentions her last name! URGHH! I'm going through a difficult trial right now! LOVE YOUR STORIES! Also, keep working on "Back to future!" I love you, Sirius! Keep writing and THANX! |
![]() ![]() Interesting. How wonderfully coincidental that Lily, James, Sirius, Peter, and Remus all meet on their very first day, no? _ Don't worry if it doesn't have much detail or depth yet, that's what introductory chapters are for. I like the dream idea. There's definite potential there, and I also have an idea for A plot, though doubtless it's a very different one from yours...what if harry went back in time to warn his parents about Peter? Waitaminute!That's cool! I'm gonna write that. :D Anyway, good effort at the sorting song too, keep it up! |
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![]() ![]() This has to be one of the best stories I have ever read. I am definately going to read every other story you write. So please write loads more. See you soon, Prest |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I am just about to go and read 'The Werewolf' now! Please keep writing you are soooo good!:} |