|Reviews for Liberation|
| Hell Bringer chapter 23 . 3/16
jeeze ellie got my personality and that kinda cool and scary because she do not know how to control hers while i can control my to a certain degree making me more lethal than her on a standard level but magic level she gonna win due to her psi powers. also when is the next chapter gonna come out it been 10 months now and still nothing so when ? my email is pls reply there if you could because i wish to know when other wise i am may have to count this story another abondant story like 40 other well done storys but didnt get updated for more then years :(
| BeatFlitz chapter 23 . 1/29
WHY... Its been one and a half years since the last update. This is my favourite fanfic out of every single one i've read thus far. I want to read more. If you read this Review... Pleas consider writing on it again
I love you for writing this in generell but pleas dont let it end like this :(
If would love to talk to you, tag: Flitzer#2466
| zimnog chapter 9 . 8/11/2017
Archons are actually that big, the legacy of the void trailer shows there actually size.
| Mpopl2 chapter 23 . 5/21/2017
This is amazing so far. A side note though, you don't seem to know the difference between to and too. You use "to" almost exclusively in your work. To is used with a destination in mind. Eg: I went to the supermarket. Too is used with the word much. Eg: She has too much power. All other grammar and spelling has been great, just that little thing that bugged me. Anyways, I really look forward to reading more!
| mercswar chapter 23 . 5/11/2017
Hey just found this story and read through it all and ill say im enjoying it, :) ill be looking forword to the next update whenever it may be
| pt1oef chapter 23 . 4/29/2017
I like seeing her lost her cool. Good work.
| Dreaded Wolf chapter 22 . 4/24/2017
The Genesis Brood.
| DrachenEngel chapter 22 . 4/19/2017
You need a dramatis Personae, it is hard to keep up with this many OCs.
| Shattersoul chapter 22 . 4/17/2017
For names for the faction...
Radio Free Zerg...
I can't think of many more.
| pt1oef chapter 22 . 4/17/2017
Didn't expect any update at all. Good work. You seem to have some interesting ideas.
| Michael. W chapter 16 . 12/30/2016
All jokes aside, i am a MASSIVE fan of StarCraft.
And i am still reading the story (chapter 16 no wohoo) and i just have to write a review!
Everything writtin in this Story so far is just absoulute insanely GOOD!
i can literely imagine how everything happends in my mind and this is how it should be.
Toshs accsent is perfect!
The characters are perfectly written, there personalities fit REALLY good!
all in all i am really impressed with your work!
PLEAS keep it up and i am exited for LotV once you finished this one!
| Dreaded Wolf chapter 21 . 12/31/2016
My only request of the story: Maybe a list of the characters so we can remember better? Like fpr example; U: Ultralisk Hybrid Leader.
| pt1oef chapter 21 . 10/28/2016
Good to see Hybrid again!
| Darth Sygnious chapter 12 . 10/17/2016
And holy $#"&, I put this on hold, and ended up postponing the reading for over a year?!
Well... *ahem!*... my apologies.
But nevertheless, it is time to catch up and continue.
First of all, interesting development.
(...Although... multiple eyes... mandibles?! For the sake of subjectivity: SCREEAAAM!)
Gotta say, liked that angry exchange between Terra and Ellie. Most Starcraft stories tend to be very serious, but this somehow feels like a comedy scene with the angry outburst.
Somehow like in anime.
I know I have expressed my issues with this story in the past, but I'll give credit where credit is due: It's never a boring read. I'm kept entertained by the setting and the mood.
I don't have much else to say
Man, I'm so out of it right now...
| pt1oef chapter 20 . 10/4/2016
Good to see new updates. Writing isn't easy.