M, I really enjoyed reading that. I loved the poetic feel both chapters gave off. This fic was nicely written!

Wow... I just absolutely love your style of writing. Though this fic was short, you were still able to pack it with so much thought and emotion. And brownie points for the Shelley reference. I hope that you're still writing, your fics have always had a flare of originality that is rather refreshing.

This was truly depressing. I must say, I am confused towards what drove Duo to this madness. Besides that though, it was fine.