Eh Jake and Tanya ?
Also I can’t believe she didn’t think to follow Tanya when she realised she was suss.

It’s off topic a bit but is something up with Derek?
Something is going to happen at the dinner.
Right?
lol
Thanks

Now follow Tanya !
Do it

Greye, I do love your writing.
THIS story was very wicked & suspenseful.
I've never been into mystery of this kind, but you
got me to truly enjoy it.
I do believe I am close to having read everything
you have written.
I am going to continue to keep looking for more.
Thanks muches for sharing.

Love It!

I loved this story. Very nice job at keeping the story line flowing. You should draw out the climax a bit longer but overall excellent work.
Thank you for sharing your story
Kelley

Thank for writing this little gem!

Why not just divorce him ? Why go through seducing Edward? Why make it so complicated?

LOL the ends kinda a joke isn't it? bella didn't overcome some huge trauma...come out on top...she allowed the perpetrator to get away yet there she is with that note from crazy stocker lady...all...bring it on! Like she did something the first time...its...kinda sad and pathetic

soooooo...they get knocked out for a few minutes...why were they so thirsty? like theyd been tied up for days without water? that was weird. you know what else was weird? this elaborate plan Tanya came up with that wasn't elaborate AT ALL. It also really didn't serve any purpose either...it didn't DO anything so I don't get it. Also why would bella and Edward run after they got loose? shouldn't they have tied those weirdos up and wait for the cops? ya I know theres a storm...but you don't let people that are after you like that go...you stick that shit out until their taken care of...why run just to have the possibility of having to do that shit all over again? And Edward loved Tanya? he confessed in the chair...and I'm confused cause I thought it was KNOWN that he didn't love her...hell even her voice pisses him off...do you mean once upon a time? like when they first met? anyway...

first off...biting so hard you bleed is erotic? I fucking think not...and I'm confused here...did Edward actually get with Tanya as sara AND jen? or does she simply have multiple personality disorder? did Tanya try the pregnant thing ten years ago or did Edward fuck her recently?

anyone else confused about how bella won that game? finding out the guy you like is a whore and a cheater isn't exactly a win. Though I guess she already knew he was a cheater since he kissed her.

the way bella just falls apart for a man she doesn't know is really disappointing. With the way you explained her background I would have thought it would take more then a pretty face to make her an idiot. You made it sound as if she had seen some shit in her life that made her skeptical...guess not

amazing how a supposed private eye doesn't even check out her clients whole story before taking the job. isn't that like private eye 101? establish what's real and what's not...starting with the client...

I have read many of your stories, so I knew you were a talented writer. I especially enjoyed this love story with a mystery that kept me on edge and guessing for a long time. Throwing crazy, obsessed Jacob into the mix was unexpected. I too appreciate an open ended finale, but in this case I was pissed that the primary villain ...SPOILER ALERT...just disappeared. I do hope you create a sequel to close a number of loose ends, even with Jacob. thanks for sharing.