Reviews for Forbidden Child
Deuce101 chapter 17 . 9/22
Evelyn was a great character in this i really teared up reading this having just lost my own grandmother too
Guest chapter 20 . 5/26
Hey brother, I don’t usually write these, but I’ve been coming back to your fic pretty consistently for a few years now. It’s one of the best written ones I’ve read, and it’s a shame to see it sitting uncompleted. I hope you find whatever motivation you need to finish it, because even after all this time, I’m excited to see where it winds up
Freund99 chapter 20 . 1/31
Great fanfic, I hope you will update it again one day and haven’t abandoned it.
Guest chapter 20 . 1/28
Did you stop writing it?
Turtle chapter 8 . 1/23
My biggest problem in this story so far is what you did with the hunters… like really? Artemis deserved to keep them, she made them. Just cuz she’s gonna be a hypocrite by falling in love doesn’t mean the hunters need to disband, they still have their oaths. Hestia can offer an alternative and honestly I couldn’t imagine any of the hunters wanting to do whatever the hell thalia was doing. I feel you really wasted the hunters in this story
Seungwon22 chapter 1 . 1/17
This is by far my favorite story and I reread it multiple times but i wish it got uodated.
AnimalLover chapter 20 . 10/9/2023
Epic fanfic. Keep it up! Are there going to be any more chapters?
Naruto Uzumaki Jackson chapter 14 . 6/3/2023
did nico dirty
Redical Gaming chapter 12 . 5/14/2023
I like the story, but this whole chapter makes no sense to me, Artemis waits around while Percy could be in danger, and some of the 3 most powerful gods can't keep one apartment safe, it's unrealistic
beentheredoneitall chapter 7 . 5/10/2023
she's hella slick
beentheredoneitall chapter 7 . 5/10/2023
that's cool
beentheredoneitall chapter 2 . 5/10/2023
three dates in 5 years? she better start working overtime she got to save the world why she thinking so long. lol
beentheredoneitall chapter 1 . 5/10/2023
This looks good
Cosmic chapter 20 . 4/2/2023
Abandoned...?
randombobawesome chapter 20 . 3/1/2023
I have to say. I forgot how much I love romantic fluf stories. it is definitely my guilty pleasure
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