Reviews for The Originals
Gothic Rain chapter 7 . 2/20
For an ancient vampire Bella sure is good at making fatal mistakes.
Cycle0fthePhoenix chapter 6 . 2/20
Well, that should throw them off her trail. After all, they would be thinking what vampire would willingly be so close to a werewolf?
Cycle0fthePhoenix chapter 3 . 2/20
its so funny seeing the Cullens on a chase. I do think Bella is giving too much away but at least she has the skill to throw them off trail. Good story so far, it's hard to believe I'm only on the 3rd chapter.
syrpanda chapter 9 . 10/7/2017
The logic (concepts? well some of the things they say) in this makes no sense at all...
merniizztat chapter 21 . 5/11/2017
Hace falta un prologo...
andrewpine chapter 2 . 6/25/2016
What did your Beta for your story it sure wasn't check your spelling. is she going to some how end up with Charlie and actually go to high school? if she does please have her eat Newton and kill Eddie.
silver-stone2 chapter 21 . 3/26/2016
are you going to finish this story?
mysterious-anonymous-secret chapter 21 . 1/1/2016
Love this! Great job :)
LeighJ11 chapter 21 . 11/1/2015
Really loved editing this with you and sad to see the ending of an amazing novel. I just want to say to all reviewers if they happen to see this that constructive criticism is appreciated but being nasty is unnecessary. Ryan is so clever in his plots and characters and they he links his novel together and that's a talent many authors crave. I'm so proud of you Ryan and looking forward to the next one.
Guest chapter 21 . 11/1/2015
you've just repeat the plot of your previous story by slightly disguising it.
Guest chapter 21 . 11/1/2015
crappy chapter
klee.v chapter 21 . 10/31/2015
I'm looking forward to the new story (:
SleepyWerewolf chapter 10 . 9/14/2015
Great story untill now... You lost me ...sorry :/
c4bb chapter 20 . 9/13/2015
I had to re-read the older chapters, but I am caught up now. It looks like everything has become one old big giant mess. I don't even know how they are going to get the upper hand against the crazy old vamps, but I'm looking forward to how it's going to play out.
Guest chapter 20 . 9/13/2015
boring as shit done with this.
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