Reviews for Burn It Black
spaycesickle chapter 6 . 3/29/2019
Oh my gosh, this is amazing. I know you haven't updated in a while, I doubt you will again, but I just wanted to let you know- this is great! A solid and intriguing plot, it's a well crafted piece of fiction. I was really looking forward to seeing what happened next.

I love the characterisation you have going on here, especially the in-betweens between characters. Tucker, Carolina, Epsilon, Felix etc. have depth, they're their own people, and it's evident from reading that they're not just props to the plot. It makes me really care about what's going to happen to them.

Totally wasn't expecting to see Kai on board, and was really interested in seeing what the Sanghelli were going to bring to the story. Not a lot of RVB fics bring them in in force, so it was good to see.

I see the author's note you ended the story on was you not in the best of places, so I'm wishing you well. Your story made my day, so I wanted to thank you for that. Hope things are going better for you, dude. Thanks for sharing.
Vixenlovesninjago chapter 6 . 1/4/2017
Guest chapter 6 . 6/28/2016
More junior
JemDragons chapter 6 . 5/6/2016
I enjoy that this fic has Junior in it.
HunterSkywalker chapter 6 . 11/15/2015
Oooh... this is gonna be good! Pls keep going, I beg of you! Don't drop this...
AmenaySeruay chapter 6 . 7/18/2015
My heart is so absolutely filled with "d'awwwwww" it could explode any second
Draconic chapter 3 . 5/27/2015
Well, this is an excellent alternate take on Season 13. I like what I've seen so far, and I'm interested in seeing what direction you're going to take it.

Just wondering, do Epsilon's ramblings actually make sense if you understand all the acronyms, or are they exclusively constructed for the gag?
axel100 chapter 2 . 5/26/2015
Another great update. The only exception I take is Sarge still worried about the Blues. I realize that old habits do indeed die hard but now that the reds and blues are collectively fighting an actual enemy that could actually kill them, I would think Sarge might update his threat matrix to reflect reality. But then again, this is Sarge to maybe you are on to something. Say does that look like a puma?
axel100 chapter 1 . 5/26/2015
A good start so far. Very vivid and descriptive as I have come to expect from you. Behind the scenes, Felix certainly isn't living up to his name is he? I see you started this before the beginning of Season 13. Should be interesting to juxtapose the two story lines.
Backseat reader chapter 6 . 5/24/2015
Kind of disappointed that it was only with locus and remix but still good
B chapter 5 . 4/15/2015
What organs do you require to update this story.
Bismarck Alexander chapter 5 . 3/19/2015
Tucker be nice to Palomo before I impregnate you with an alien baby. And speaking of baby, I'm seeing a nice family reunion.
Velgamidragon chapter 5 . 3/14/2015
YesyesyesyesyesyesYES! ! ! Junior's back and he's in his religious leader role as described in the prophecy thing! OMG, yes, I've been really jumping onto this idea for a while now recently ever since I started reading some of the post-Halo 3 material and realized that there's an actual need for some sort of religious direction among the Sangheili now. On top of that, the story has very good quality writing, everyone's in-character, and the pacing is good. I am actually ridiculously pleased to have found this!
zecaptain chapter 5 . 3/1/2015
eeeeeeeeeeeee! Yesss! Ehehehe.
I love the dimpomat and badass Tucker you got going on and just- so much love for junior coming back.
I mean, dat entrance. Fuck yeah.
Love your style, everyone is in character and the dialogue is just so genuinely witty. This whole thing reads like an episode.
Very awesome. Please update again soon!
Super Eddy Fan chapter 5 . 2/28/2015
Great story so far. You don't get enough reviews for how goods it is going. Though on the lead up to this I've been thinking about something. Sangheilli are not usually supposed to know who their fathers are, so is Junior just an exception to that or does he call Tucker mom since he did actually get impregnated and give birth to Junior? And I think the idea of him calling Tucker his mother is just hilarious.
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