|Reviews for The Book|
| Card. Ham'n'Eggs chapter 1 . 9/5/2020
I DEFINITELY like it. Ash Tree, known for his insufferable mental density, is learning Kalosian, the language of love.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2016
I loved it that was a really good story! I love ur story's!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2016
Red Pheonix from serebi amour thread here. I liked your story. It was well written and you really got me in the end. But if I had to criticize, there's one thing.
You said that Ash's brain locked into "no excuse mode" but when Serena asked him if it were his book, he took a 180 and confessed. It feels out of nowhere and inconsistent.
| warzonecall chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
I always had a feeling that the Kalos region was based from France and how they speak french. The ending was a sweet and it was well written, indeed a real piece of work.
| ThatRandomYee chapter 1 . 5/21/2016
Aww! I'm a guy but I still find fanfic a good, especially this one. I thought it was very well written. And I translated Merci pour cette surprise. Je l'ai adoré. Presque autant que je t'aime.". It means "thank you for the surprise, I loved it, almost as much as I love you." Love it! Good job man! Keep up the good work!
| Akanksha chapter 1 . 3/5/2016
okay.. i feel so fuckinh embarrassed..
i thought he was reading porn.. WTF was I even thinking.. Damn my gutter mind HAHAHAHAHAHA xD
but this was really cute.. i lovedddddd it..
| Ash the Aura Guardian chapter 1 . 7/28/2015
I know why you wrote this the way you did, and I have only one thing to say; well played.
| Amourshipper chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
Oh... well $H1T. I thought it would be something WAAAAY more embarassing, like a "girly" romance novel, or some H.E.N.T.A.I / por -well, you know what I mean! 0/0
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
That was beautiful
| sekretagentmans chapter 1 . 3/20/2015
It's funny how it's a Japanese to French dictionary and Ash and Serena both speak clear English.
| justareadersofar chapter 1 . 2/15/2015
i was very confused at first but once i realized what the book was i thought it was a cute story and a nice concept for a oneshot. keep up the great writing!
| saekdk chapter 1 . 2/14/2015
can anyone translate what she said and send it to me? cant copy from ... please and thank you
| anon chapter 1 . 2/3/2015
I liked it, you did a good job. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2015
I loved this! Amour as a pairing could use a lot more fics like this. I really liked how you wrote Ash; he seems like the kind of guy to be really shy about that kind of stuff.
I noticed a tiny mistake in the French at the end. "J'ai adoré" should be "Je l'ai adoré."
Thanks for writing this! I'll definitely be reading more of your fics.
| Shadow of Hearts chapter 1 . 2/2/2015
A nicely written story. The ending was a sweet treat for the reader. J'ai adore!