Reviews for The Book
Card. Ham'n'Eggs chapter 1 . 9/5/2020
I DEFINITELY like it. Ash Tree, known for his insufferable mental density, is learning Kalosian, the language of love.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2016
I loved it that was a really good story! I love ur story's!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2016
Red Pheonix from serebi amour thread here. I liked your story. It was well written and you really got me in the end. But if I had to criticize, there's one thing.

You said that Ash's brain locked into "no excuse mode" but when Serena asked him if it were his book, he took a 180 and confessed. It feels out of nowhere and inconsistent.
warzonecall chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
I always had a feeling that the Kalos region was based from France and how they speak french. The ending was a sweet and it was well written, indeed a real piece of work.
ThatRandomYee chapter 1 . 5/21/2016
Aww! I'm a guy but I still find fanfic a good, especially this one. I thought it was very well written. And I translated Merci pour cette surprise. Je l'ai adoré. Presque autant que je t'aime.". It means "thank you for the surprise, I loved it, almost as much as I love you." Love it! Good job man! Keep up the good work!
Akanksha chapter 1 . 3/5/2016
okay.. i feel so fuckinh embarrassed..
i thought he was reading porn.. WTF was I even thinking.. Damn my gutter mind HAHAHAHAHAHA xD

but this was really cute.. i lovedddddd it..

beautiful..!
Ash the Aura Guardian chapter 1 . 7/28/2015
I know why you wrote this the way you did, and I have only one thing to say; well played.
Amourshipper chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
Oh... well $H1T. I thought it would be something WAAAAY more embarassing, like a "girly" romance novel, or some H.E.N.T.A.I / por -well, you know what I mean! 0/0
Guest chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
That was beautiful
sekretagentmans chapter 1 . 3/20/2015
It's funny how it's a Japanese to French dictionary and Ash and Serena both speak clear English.
justareadersofar chapter 1 . 2/15/2015
i was very confused at first but once i realized what the book was i thought it was a cute story and a nice concept for a oneshot. keep up the great writing!
saekdk chapter 1 . 2/14/2015
can anyone translate what she said and send it to me? cant copy from ... please and thank you
anon chapter 1 . 2/3/2015
I liked it, you did a good job. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2015
I loved this! Amour as a pairing could use a lot more fics like this. I really liked how you wrote Ash; he seems like the kind of guy to be really shy about that kind of stuff.

I noticed a tiny mistake in the French at the end. "J'ai adoré" should be "Je l'ai adoré."

Thanks for writing this! I'll definitely be reading more of your fics.
Shadow of Hearts chapter 1 . 2/2/2015
A nicely written story. The ending was a sweet treat for the reader. J'ai adore!
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