I really hope you come back to this story someday. I’ve just finished it for the second time and it’s really fantastic work. If not, I hope you are doing well and life is treating you good. Thank you for the many hours of enjoyment you’ve given me through this work!

this is an amazingly written story. it is well executed to what i think the author wanted. that said, i personally dont understand how someone can enjoy literally making one of the best couples just to shred and manipulate them over and ove. this m. this story was well made but i fucking hate it. but please know that its not how you write but just what you wrote ya know. anyways thats my thoughts

this story is absolute garbage.

fuck you. fuck your garbage ass writing.

what the actual fuck is wrong with you?

bad writing. awful story.

WHY THE FUCK IS HE TRYING TO STAY IN THE COMPETITION?! WHY?! im done, harry is a fucking retard. zero braincells. gets entered into a deadly tournament against his will, and COMPLETELY IGNORES THE EASY WAY TO GET OUT OF IT.

why the fuck didnt he just do bad on purpose and quit?! absolutely terrible fucking writing. beyond awful. why the fuck is he TRYING to win?!

wait a sec...unlike the canon tournament people can and will get eliminated in the very first round. in canon they couldnt quit even if they performed like dogshit, but here harry could just purposely do really bad, right? tho the way the eliminations work im not sure he CAN get eliminated.

i guess the school cant get mad at harry for stealing hufflepuffs glory in this fic (assuming harry still gets forced in) since there will be a person from each house. ron'll still probably get mad tho, itd be super out of character if he didnt.

well, at least harry didnt get caught up in that fracas at the world cup this time around, thats nice.

i dont wanna give up on the story so early...but the dialogue is really bad sometimes. its super stilted and awkward, people dont talk like that.

why the fuck would someone writing fanfiction brag about getting a C in english? thats like saying up front the writing is gonna suck ass. the story might not actually even be that bad, but holy fuck is that a terrible first impression to make.

This was NOT an adventure/romance story but a hurt/comfort & Hearve drama/Angst story. Ok for what it was but horrid for what it was advertised as. In no way was it a "realistic " relationship, if people think it was then you probably loved the Ron/ Hermione romance of jkr.

Goddamn you're a fucking terrible writer. Just fucking delete this story, it'd be the smartest choice you've ever made.