I love and appreciate the humanity you gave the characters that are often portrayed as villains all the way. Thank you for a fantastic read. Hope you’re doing well

Thank you for the end note. I hope you'll continue someday but I understand if you can't.

Holy shit that's really poignant

YOSH YOUR OMAKE HAS FILLED ME WITH YOUTH

Orochimaru and hidan are great

Orochimaru is just the best

Several things
You do a very good job of making your characters people such as the way you treated hidan
I think orochimaru calling hiruzen Mr hokage is quite funny
since you have a goal of keeping Naruto's power set a secret once it is revealed maybe do omake about his training with jiraiya

This is very well written in general I had some more specific comments but I no longer remember them as I went down reading the chapter I like how you treated killing intent and I like the world the legally provided for suna

However I ever thought wouldn't sooner have more seal Masters since academy students and the like are encouraged to make exploding and storage seals
Specifically in the sense of statistically if every single student learns how to make a seal as part of their standard academy training to produce seals for the general populace than the odds of some student figuring out that they love seals is much higher than in other places where learning how to do seals is instead optional or something that you volunteer for

I really like the way that you're treating sasu-saku it's not out of nowhere it provides some very nice character interaction and insight into Sasuke and it provides a stepping point from which either romance can form or it could be an idle thought

Generally though nicely done even though I know you don't like writing romance that one line really meant a lot

I am posting this review before I finish reading the chapter

Would this make Sasuke unlock the mangekyo sharingan because I feel that it would however if he does not as long as you explain it in or out of Canon in a way that makes sense I would be satisfied

Yes I am aware that I'm posting this after the fact that whatever chapter that I'm expecting about is already come to be but it's fun to pretend that every single chapter is just come out plus it lets you see how people view your thick even if the chapter that they're on has chapters after it

This review is a little late seeing as I should have posted it a couple chapters ago but I really like the way that you a made haku an oto Shinobi but zabusa I've just found is not because assumedly konoha would not hire an oto shinobi

This is also one of the first fix that has turned Naruto going to suna into something that makes sense and isn't an excuse for super Naruto or Naruto gets kicked out and so it makes new friends where everyone loves him and he's super cool

I really like how you treated shukaku and also trollrochimaru

I feel that they are very well characterized
Also I love how you treat his use of the Edo tensei

You misspelled juken as jiken

kankuro's fight was a good ninja fight.., it wasn't as bad as u seem to think ... flashy stuff sucks after a while

The obvious guess is that Orochimaru is the old snake, Naruto is the young snake, and Orochimaru wishes someone told him this story. I fear I am failing to look underneath the underneath...