I havent even started readiong yet and received a lecture on muh homofobia. Average day on smh

Would 100% rasengan the aiuthor's ghey head

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I dearly hope you'll continue this, and that you put Naruto and Temari together, I've always thought they would make a cute couple, but they never had a good reason to be one, until now. Hoping for something new soon!

Man Orochimaru is reallly getting on my nerves, make him make more sense please!

Ahh, cabbages and pokemon, such fun! By the way you miss spelled quiet, it ended up as 'quite,' which is not quite right. ;)

That was so much fun to read, I would love to see that animated, it would be crazy.

He won't seek power from Orochimaru, he has his team and his good sensei and the bonus seal, he doesn't need to leave, and he actually is using his head.

Your Sakura does not deserve flunking, canon does. I think Naruto's swords just give him another way to fight and defend his team, he is basically becoming an opportunist in fighting, whatever method is going to work/he thinks of is what he'll do. It would also be a crime to not give him tons of jutsu, he probably has the largest chakra reserves of anyone in the Narutoverse.

Exactly what I expected of Kakashi, he played them like a fiddle!

If you like Ibiki you need to read "Can you see me now?" it is really good, and has Ibiki in a prominent role, I won't say more or I'll spoil the fun.

A fan of the Expanded Universe! I have found another of my kind! I also do like your story so far.

I agree with spiritwolf35, I also will not read this, or any of your other stories if you do that.

I quite like Haku and Zabuza, I heartily welcome them being alive.

I've seen the clone cloning done is several other fics, which were really good, so I don't see why not.

I am having a ball with this Kakashi, he's even more fun when he's not super depressed and suicidal, and him matchmaking Naruto and Hinata is hilarious and adorable!