The whole sakura inazuka stuff doesn’t make any sense. Why would a clan train SAKURA a civilian genin, with some of their techniques. It won’t benefit them in anyway and if the inazuka clan trained every civilian that impressed them with their techniques then the clan wouldn’t be a clan by this point. And I refuse to believe that Sakura is somehow impressive enough for them to train her and treat her as one of their own.

If I'm reading between the lines correctly, Orochimaru is Groundhog-Day looping intentionally in the hopes that he can create a world he's satisfied with, and the only method he has of influencing people who don't trust him is leveraging that to make them think about the stories he tells. That's why they don't have an ending; he doesn't know what the ending is anymore than his audience would.

I have finished this chapter and your afterthoughts. Please know that when I write one of these reviews, I am trying my best to give honest feedback with the intent of letting you know what I enjoyed and what I hope to see. I hope that none of my reviews are taken as flames or hate speak. Rest assured that if I strongly dislike a story bad enough, I will just avert my gaze and walk away.

I was under the impression that Naruto and his fellows were 13 years old when they graduate. Then again the anime never spelled out how old people were. If so it was rare.

I loved this chapter!

I like when authors take chances with Naruto and give him different abilities and or weapons than his canon self. I never liked that about Naruto is that so many of his fights boil down to shadow clones followed by rasengan or rasenshuriken for the win. Naruto needs some variety. Besides being a ninja means having surprises. Being predictable as a ninja means death. By way, when will Kurama make his grand entrance? I am curious as to how our favorite fox will be.

Again this story has surprised me while giving me a great laugh. Still eagerly awaiting Anko x Naruto. Now the exams are going on,Anko can meet Naruto.

I am glad that Sasuke has been shown a mirror in the form of Neji. This may get him to fully accept team seven and reject the big snake himself. You do a wonderful job for the most part with these characters. I am interested to see what you have planned for Tenten.

No no no NO! Kakashi and Anko don’t belong together. Comrades? Yes. Friends? Yes. Lovers? Nope. They have no chemistry and it feels forced. Just like all the Anko x Iruka stories out there are also shoehorned together. A relationship only works with compatibility. Meaning they have things in common. Kakashi and Anko have nothing in common. Just like Iruka and Anko have nothing in common. Kakashi is laidback and well respected. Anko is loud,passionate and impulsive and hated/feared. That’s why I keep mentioning Anko x Naruto. And no I am not asking for lemu. You mentioned Star Wars EU books and I own many of those books. You are right. Relationships in the EU were tasteful with no lemon but still allowing passionate moments for the characters. That is what I like stories I read to be like, strong focus and action while mixing in some humor or romance now and then.

Very interesting chapter,very interesting indeed. Another prideful arrogant character gets some much needed humble pie served to him. Excellent work.

Very interesting chapter,very interesting indeed. Another prideful arrogant character gets some much needed humble pie served to him. Excellent work.

Alright I will take your warnings seriously. As soon as I see any homo stuff,I will just leave. And I do object to the word homophobic. I am not afraid of homo. To me it’s disgusting like eating poop. If I see someone eating poop I just avert my gaze and walk away. That is my primary response to homo as well,avert my gaze and walk away. If someone wants to engage in disgusting stuff like eating poop or homo relationships, I recognize that is their choice. Just like it’s my choice not to look at such things.

I am glad that Sakura is getting some much needed growth. And from the Inazuka clan as well. Sasuke seems to be calmer. As for Naruto it seems that there is no one perfect teacher for Naruto. Basically Kurenai can teach control and hopefully gengetsu. Might Guy can teach fighting skills. And Kakashi can teach jutsu. I believe that would be best.

Wow Sakura is the one to hit Imari and yell at him? Really? I believe that you are the only one that has done that . Ten gold stars for you. Give me Anko x Naruto and I will give you as many gold stars as you want. I already gave my reasons why I want that. With the exams coming soon it will be easy for them to meet and notice the other.

Well considering that the shadow clones each has the abilities of the original,it makes sense that they to can make clones. It was funny how Zabuza reacted to the strategy,that was priceless. Can’t wait for Anko x Naruto. The exams will be here soon and We will meet Anko.