Reviews for Untold Destiny
HorrorFan13 chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
update please!
Mary Sue chapter 1 . 6/1/2010

You've been written up.
Kesperlis chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
Hey awesome story please continue!

Does Kaede come later or do they not go to the village at all?
iLUVfire chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
eep! and continue! please? :big shippo-esque eyes emerge:
BrieZee chapter 1 . 2/8/2003
I like the story post more
Ren chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
Cool. Keep goin'
Bunny-sama chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
O_O Whah...why did you stop! (Digging the whole American girl pioint of veiw, after all i'm one myself) Okay, so you started all the way at the begining?. I'm not exactly sure as to the changes will hapen in this respect, it's amazing how a change in culture could do that...

Coments: If Eve is an insomniac, wont that be two "sleepless" beings, after all Inuyasha doesn't need to sleep, he just ocationally doses off from sheer boredom. Another thing, what's with the same Kikyo, chosen one thing? She wasn't even gaurdian of the well/shrine in this senario...then again, she said she'd gone there scince she was a child. Another thing, if Eve could fight and is as ruthless as I've inturpeted, wont that alter the story line too as that she feels she can "take care of herself"...well at least fist-fight.

Don't mind me, it's a good story and I look forward to reading the next chapter... n_n see ya.
Jupiter's Light chapter 1 . 12/3/2002