Interesting history, though with multiple chapters on this it seems long time to go to teach Harry a lesson. Curious to see where you go next. Thanks for your hard work on this.

Will Harry become evil? or have different goals? Instead of protecting, switching to destroying? What about morals?

Absolutely love this story so far. It's brilliant from your depiction of Daphne and Harry to how the story flows its fantastic. I do wonder about the entity in Harry's head its certainly a mystery...is it part of the Horcrux? or is it really a part of Harry that seeks to help him? And if it does seem to help then how does it have its knowledge when Harry himself didn't? Unless the wraiths gave it knowledge? Another thing I want to comment on is some grammar mistakes and the like such as saying that Alberic "learnedDaphne those things when it should be 'taught'. Just an example there are some others. Also you call platform 9 3/4 'peron' which I'm guessing is a translation but was still quite odd to come across. I look forward to the next chapter.

Great chapter

ive said it before and ill say it again this story is fuckin excellent i constantly check for updates

Please tell me the next chapter comes soon. That was a hell of a way to end the chapter

oh mannn

you ended it there

post soon...

Wow, great chapter! And what a suspenseful way to end! Can't wait to learn more about Alberic's past.

I enjoyed seeing more into Daphne's life, and also how Harry is beginning to become more independent with how he stood up to Mrs. Weasley. It was kind of funny too how Daphne is usually pretty restrained but Astoria can easily get a rise out of her. I thought that was a pretty realistic of the Greengrass family.

Her parents are interesting too, and I like Alberic's characterization. He has a distinct personality about him. I'm really interested to learn more about his past and how it shaped their family, especially with all the allusions we've been hearing about it for quite some time now.

Thanks for continuing your story, really looking forward to the next chapter!

Damn this was good Alberic is shown perfectly as what I would expect Daphne's father to be like stern but not harsh and cold but not the clichéd "oh Harry thank you go ahead do whatever with my daughter we already love you like a son anyway" he's cautious and clearly does not approve of Harry learning dark spells but understands Harry is kind of forced into a corner and just doing his best...but in the end still doesn't fully approve I like it Astoria is a little troll and its great I also loved how real Daphne's reaction to her was a typical big sister being embarrassed by her little sister shows a very human character which is hard since there really isn't a "canon" Daphne asides from a brief mention and a name any who one little grammar issue when Alberic says "I learned her to be like that" it should be taught or raised instead of learned just a minor thing to improve the flow this was great and I cant wait to read the next chapter and see the memories

Great to see a new chapter and also good to see things now move onto the first meeting between Harry and Daphne's family. Very interesting that her father helped Harry gain some more understanding of Daphne by filling in some of the blanks in relation to Daphne's initial motivations and actions.

Ended with a bit of a cliffy - looking forward to seeing what he learns from Daphne's father and how you reconcile the dangers of the dark arts with the role of the entity.

Really looking forward to the next update.

Im sure after seeing the memory harry wont stop infact he will fully finish the book and return it at this point harry does not care about repercussions coz hes already dark at this stage :)

Awaiting more.

great work thanks!

I am really, really curious now. Are you trying to kill me of curiosity?

A good chapter as always, but I believe the really good stuff(Harry/Daphne fluff) will come in the chapters after the memories are show. I am curious about them though. Did I said that I am curious about the memories.

One thing I never understood in the books were the reasons for Dumbledore waste so much effort in protecting the prophecy. It doesn't say anything earth shattering, at least I don't think so.

Till next time.

Excellent chapter.