Excellent start.

very good

I see that Harry doesn't find the book of the Half blood Prince in this story. Perhaps Harry could use the power of his horcrux to make up for it?

good old Dumbledore, preparing his little lamb for the slaughter, interesting start.

nice so far

This is ineteresting, Harry has met what is possibly the fragment of toms soul In his head and now has to decide whether he frees it or not.

this is good I take it that harry just met the horcrux interesting take on it by the way really unique I'm surprised this is your first time writing its good you detail things out well and have the characters all acting like themselves I'm eager to see harry improve especially since the second to last bullet point on your authors note on the bottom said you weren't going to give him some godlike powers which is nice honestly i never understood those elemental harry stories i mean if he wants to shoot fire or lightning there are spells for that no need to add some ridiculous power up

Seems interesting, though you haven't diverged far from canon at this point. I look forwards to seeing how this story develops. Only a few literary errors, mostly just capitalisation.

Keep up the good work!