|Reviews for Wicked|
| persistentprism chapter 9 . 8/18/2013
This has been one of my favourite fanfics ever, for literally years. I'm glad to see that it's still on the Internet somewhere. I love your harsh, dark, rather realistic characterization, while still keeping the canon characters recognizable and interesting. Thank you for writing and sharing this story.
| popcorngoo chapter 10 . 5/26/2013
Wow this actually did have a somewhat nice ending! I was thinking everyone was going to be killed. Or that kagome would never truly be loved by inuyasha or something. But that was relatively nice.
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/29/2012
The one thing is to learn about this hideous story is that you are Bipolar that like to ruffle some feathers, I don't get the lots of reviews in this crap of story the same straight up standard InuYasha formalist story based bullshit, no to mention it the stupidity in the plot. poor loser go now and finish read/watch the manga/Anime, then come back and we all see the nonsenses that this fic is.
| EmoTunaFish0.0 chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
This is really interesting and great to read. Thanks for writing!
| xXxAddicted2ChocolatexXx chapter 10 . 1/23/2012
| Manoella Nascimento chapter 10 . 11/3/2011
I like this dark twist. It makes sence - Inu his a dog, after all. I wonder if he trully had a puppy with Kagome as fast as he said he would. ; )
| Efrite chapter 10 . 4/26/2011
Very Nice Story there.. Loved it.
A truly adult story without all the sugar coating it.
Please continue to write.
| Raven2010 chapter 10 . 10/25/2010
beautiful story love it" (_)
| J Luc Pitard chapter 10 . 9/28/2010
Interesting and difficult story. I get what you're going for with his understanding of mating versus Kagome's need for romantic love and the reality being somewhere in between for both of them. Or I think I do. Anyway, well written. I see it was a story you wrote well before the end was in sight for the series (and we never even got the kiss scene!) and it looks like you stopped writing fan fic back in '04, but I wanted to let you know that I liked it.
| Zanbandia chapter 10 . 6/20/2010
Wow, I rarely read Inu/kagome. I wanted to see how you handled the whole mates things. I really really really loved it! I actually enjoyed reading the pairing because you wrote it so well.
The fact that Kagome is InuYasha's mate, made her more important than love. I think its a very powerful statement to the whole mates thing in the InuYasha fandom. Good job!
| BloodFlowsLikeHoney chapter 6 . 12/25/2009
Dear Kayla Chavi,
No offense, but I absolutely hate yor story, as I hate all Inuyasha/Kagome stories where Inuyasha doesn't love Kagome and he is just using her for the sex or for some odd mate thing. I mean stories where they are mates aren't odd I just don't like the way you have portrayed mates. And again, no offense, but your story made me sick to my stomach and I can't even finish reading it because I am so disgusted. Still, no offense. I am not going to lower myself by completing this story. And Kayla Chavi, I am sorry for this but: Anyone who is reading this review should not finish reading this story because...well I have no good reason other than the horridness of Inuyasha using Kagome and the morbid way you have portrayed mates. I will tell you right now that that is not how mates really are. I may not be able to give you a good defintion of mates but what you have described is not it, it is just a sick and twisted little demon sex thing that you have created. I don't like it, and I would actually call myself offended by this rubbish. I really am sorry if I have offended you, I just had to get my point across. And if you are so angry with me for talking badly about your story, I will not hold it against you to flame me, call me names, use obscene language towards my being, and more. I shall not get mad or retaliate at any of this behavior from your person. Actually, I might get angry with you, and I might retaliate. Even thought it is unlikely. You can never know though because I have a wicked temper and could probably be set off at a very trivial thing concerning Inuyasha and Kagome. I have talked for quite a long while, and have most likely taken up much of your time since you were forced to read this ridiculously long Author's Note. For that I apologize. Since I cannot conjure up anything else to say at the moment, Farwell.
| Blueberry Babe chapter 10 . 9/1/2009
good job. thanks
| pleasebringlumpia chapter 10 . 8/5/2009
How many times have I read this story?_
| Everlasting-Rose21 chapter 10 . 7/4/2009
This has to be one of the best fan fictions i have read on fanfiction! Great plot! The whole idea was just such a great idea and so well written!
| WITCHBLADE86 chapter 10 . 6/12/2009
WOW! Loved every bit of it. KUDOS!