Reviews for A God Amongst Men |
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![]() ![]() make one more just one chapter please |
![]() ![]() Reading these awkward and forced flirtation scenes is about as cringe as listening to an Indian man try to flirt with a woman in English. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nuevo cap |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have enjoyed this story a lot, the only criticism I would offer is that it seems unnecessary for Naruto to have both Erza and the princess. The Erza relationship just feels forced and unfounded. I suppose you sre doing it as a metaphor for Naruto being torn between his lust for battle and his lust for knowledge and order. I hope you feel inspired and compose another chapter for this story soon. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() All right, that was a pretty cool fight at the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think Naruto needs to screw all the attractive women, surely there is at least one who really wants to do so. But i understand if you want to keep his ultimate power, talk no jutsu, under wraps until he encounters Acnologia. |
![]() ![]() Don’t buff characters to give your MC a challenge. That’s boring and honestly just lazy writing. |
![]() ![]() For someone as strong and proud as him he’s letting an awful lot of people walk all over him. Seems to be a recurring theme in all your stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story hope you can me back to it |
![]() ![]() great but i wish we got know what happened to mei |
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![]() ![]() Worst fic I've ever read. Unnecessarily edgy as hell and the random Homophobia for Naruto? Naruto the guy who was discriminated for something out of his control, would never discriminate against other people for something out of their control. But I guess failures like you who don't have an ounce of reading comprehension won't get that |
![]() ![]() Waiting for new capt (y) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the first time somebody is stressing over not getting a fight I understand he enjoys battle but stressing over not getting one that’s actually disappointing and can also put the ones he love in danger and other innocent people in the crossfire of getting harmed |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope the atmosphere has a safe delivery |