Boring.

If you're still working on this then I'd like to read some more

This is a really good fanfiction keep going please

sorry, that last comment was me forgetting to log in.

Thank you, guest! i am still new to fanfiction, so there my be some weirdness.

Two things. The gang just made a horrible mistake. Secondly, I like how you inform us that there are misspellings, but didn't do Jack about it

Thank you for the reviews! I will be doing longer chapters in the future, after I learn how to use fan fiction! How do I add a chapter without saving a new document to my already slow computer?

Very interesting. Please continue.

The idea is solid, it's great even, however I would recommend doing longer chapters in future. But like I said, your idea is good, just expand on a bit more. Thanks for your time.