Reviews for The Green Girl
rotkudnok chapter 1 . 11/30
I don't get it. In the first chapter it's been clearly indicated that Slytherin is drenched in blood purism. Well, where is it? That's one of the things that push me away from reading this further.

The other one ties with how a surprising amount of people praise the story for how Slytherin Hermione works so well and *natural*. Because, from my perspective, it's anything *but* natural. It *kinda* works because the author forces it to work, breaking most characters in the process
Guest chapter 22 . 11/28
I would follow this hermione to the ends of the world.
Anemone chapter 22 . 11/26
...wasn't quite done with the review before hitting send. I loved how well you were able to lighten the mood, to weave in Luna and teenage bliss between the darker scenes. Even the beginning was wonderfully scripted, I love Narcissa as a supportive mother-to-be and the Jule Ball scene was great. The insults against the Weasleys' poverty might have been a bit much occasionally. But Snape, as a character, was pure gold, absolutely fantastically written. Of course he sent the lillies.
Wonderful story, artfully written, brilliant. Thank you for sharing!
Guest chapter 22 . 11/26
This was brilliant! Read the hole thing in one day, simply couldn't put it down. Stunning. Smart. So many cold-blooded, sane, heart-wrenching, necessary choices. I celebrated how she killed the death eaters, Bella and the Carrows and everyone who'd kill a child. Neville was awesome. I love that the Dark Lord was finally vanquished through poison, not a big flasy duel. So many masks, perfectly executed plan.
Very Small Prophet chapter 19 . 11/22
It is entirely appropriate that Voldemort used Welsh magic to come back to life, considering that he was defeated by a Welshwoman, Lily Evans.
Harry got the credit because the Boy-Who-Lived is a better slogan to rally round than the Woman-Who-Died.
Sometimes I think Severus resented Harry less because of his resemblance to James than because he had stolen the fame and credit that properly belonged to Lily.
Very Small Prophet chapter 11 . 11/22
Snape not only references Dante, he also paraphrases Ogden Nash: “The trouble with a kitten is THAT / Eventually it becomes a CAT.”
Eisauge chapter 21 . 11/15
I wish it would never end
Guest chapter 15 . 11/6
Why are 14 - 16 year olds having sex
Guest chapter 15 . 11/6
Why are 14 - 16 year olds having sex
HappilyGrim chapter 22 . 10/31
Hey, I understand you might have forgotten about this one, but I read it years ago and when i got on a fanfic bing I remembered how much I loved it. I just reread the whole thing and WOW I love the end. I forgot how Hermione’s last big plan hit like a truck. Anyway I’m taking your advice and will read Shealone’s Dark Lady trilogy next. I’m also looking forward to your newer one Things in Common.
I don’t like the Harry Potter series too much but I LOVE these kinds of fanfics.
Thanks for writing it and not taking it down. If you ever publish anything I’d love to read it.
Lavirtu02 chapter 6 . 10/12
Holy shit
Lavirtu02 chapter 5 . 10/12
Oh m god I love this fiction
W. L. O'Fallon chapter 22 . 10/13
Very lovely. Thanks for answering those questions. I enjoyed this story. Lucius is very lucky he never choose to hurt draco lol
W. L. O'Fallon chapter 20 . 10/13
Ooo Hermione lol
W. L. O'Fallon chapter 12 . 10/13
Lola heart is lame lol
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