|Reviews for The Green Girl|
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/5/2020
I never expected Ron to become a Muggle born hater...I guess it makes sense if Hermione is the only Muggle born he knows but still, his family would be shocked to hear him call her a mudblood! I'm guessing in later chapters (books 5-7) Hermione will turn against the rest of her house because you can't be the only exception in a genocide. I do love her friendship with the other Slytherins though! It's nice to see her have more than 2 friends for once
| JayColinKae chapter 7 . 7/7/2020
Heyy u just mentioned Umbridge
Slytherins in fift years were kinda assholes alongside her
That makes me wonder, what does it feel like writing this story? Do u hate Hagrid Ron and Harry? How has it been?
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/4/2020
The end of this chapter was so in character for Hermione. To have worked so hard only for it to be snatched away would hurt her so much
| JayColinKae chapter 4 . 7/6/2020
Heyyy it’s jay and kae again! So I absolutely LOATHE Lucius Malfoy. But u kinda made me like him in this story. Same as with Draco. I used to hate Draco, but then I read some fics and I like him now. I don’t love him, specially not on the books but now i don’t hate him
I just don’t want to like Lucius lol
| JayColinKae chapter 2 . 7/6/2020
I love this
Even though I’m a proud gryffindor and will always be, I never found it fair that the pattern changed at the last minute. Dumbledor could just done it before the ceremony. He humiliated the Slytherins and that’s not fair
| JayColinKae chapter 1 . 7/5/2020
I just love the idea. It’s amusing. And I already live the story simply by the fact that u mentions Hogwarts A History. It’s hermione, no matter the house, still our mione
| Awkward Animagus chapter 11 . 7/5/2020
I looooove your Snape! He’s just so delightfully perfectly MEAN and right!
| Cupcakegracieeeee chapter 1 . 7/4/2020
Ok so I read this once years ago and ive never been able to find it since. Like i read it on an old laptop and i couldnt remember the name or anything but the other day i was like omigod its called the green girl so naturally i search for it on ao3 (thats where i tend to read fics nowadays) and then wattpad and i was like what the where could it be and then i was all like oh my god what if its on FanFiction so i looked for it on here and ive finally found it XD basically its one of my favs fics and i wanted to send it to a friend but also im like so stoked to read it again bc like its one of the best fics (and probably the best Harry Potter fic) ive ever read and just idk its amazing
| lilpenguin01 chapter 1 . 7/3/2020
I couldn't put this down. great job!
| The Last Rose to Fall chapter 22 . 7/3/2020
THIS WAS INCREDIBLE! YOU HAVE DONE A WONDEROUS JOB AND WRITTEN AND FANTASTIC STORY THAT I AM GOING TO RECOMMEND TO EVERYONE I KNOW WHO LOVES HARRY POTTER!
| jacksoncrow chapter 12 . 7/1/2020
I'm pretty sure this fic is finished by now, but I would've thought most people knew coming in that this would diverge from cannon plenty. What's the point of dark hermione if she's still fighting alongside harry and against the deatheaters esp after this whole alliance with the malfoys. Just writing to tell you I'm greatly enjoying your writing!
| DarkAngel chapter 2 . 6/27/2020
Hm, interesting premise but I don't know what to think of the implementation. Your story reminds me a lot of "They Shook Hands" where Harry gets sorted into Slytherin and befriends his whole house. I would prefer it if Hermione had trouble getting a long with all the purebloods, I don't think that they would so easily accept her with their purist mentality. They would feign unity in front of the other houses but I would think that she would have it quite difficult behind the closed doors of the dungeon. Anyhow, I'll keep reading
| Itack23 chapter 22 . 6/29/2020
Well, hadn't see the FAQs, it answer my question haha
Thank you for that xD
| Itack23 chapter 21 . 6/29/2020
The conclusion sentence of the healers just made me laugh for a good while!
The story's quite peculiar but really interesting to read!
I do wonder about a thing though: the lilies with the 'Thank You' card... Did Harry really die or is it him that send it? (Lilies are often the flowers used as his emblem, what about his mother named Lily)
| beccasullivanwrites1 chapter 22 . 6/25/2020
Holy hell, that was an amazing story and I couldn’t put it down! Thank you so much for your time and work!