Reviews for The Green Girl
AnaBrest15 chapter 2 . 2/6/2015
Year two In a month! :(.. Well I for you I wait a thousand years :D. The chapters were magnificent really you are my favorite writer
emani-writes chapter 2 . 2/6/2015
Not to be a complete and utter nag but a month?! A whole, terrible month?! I LOVE Slytherin Hermione! I love Draco's little crush! I love how they all take care of her! I want to see how Dumbledore's blatant favoritism affects her in the years to come. Come on woman! It's not like you have 4 other story commitments or anything!
JenCala28 chapter 2 . 2/6/2015
Lovely! I love this idea and I can't wait to read more. I always sympathized so much with poor Slytherin for things like losing the cup. They earned it by working towards it all year long and the stupid Golden Trio does something stupid that happens to turn out all right due to sheer dumb luck (and Hermione) and they lose. EVERY year. I love that it looks like Parvati is taking Hermione's place. I can't wait to see what you do with this!
ShiroKuro OokamiRyu chapter 2 . 2/6/2015
That... Was... Brilliant! It's amazing how you used the scenes in the movie and a few more that connects the story better, it was perfection!
stardust923 chapter 2 . 2/6/2015
Oops, accidentally posted my review as a guest, a few seconds ago. So let me reiterate that I really like this story so far, and can't wait to see where you take it (and I'm especially looking forward to seeing how you develop Hermione's relationships with the Slytherin boys).
Guest chapter 2 . 2/6/2015
I LOVE this story! I love the idea of Hermione as a Slytherin, and the rest of the house taking her in as one of their own despite her blood status. I've always felt that Hogwarts in general seemed prejudiced against Slytherins, even the first years, so I love the perspective you're providing here. Really looking forward to reading more!
ncwinkwink chapter 2 . 2/6/2015
This is amazing. I really love seeing how its looks from the "other" side. Especially the interactions between teachers and students. I also love how you kept Hermione independent and slightly self-righteous, completely kept her personality, and put her in a whole different place in the Potterverse. I can't wait for more.
shinigami-seeker chapter 2 . 2/6/2015
Now this is going to be a brilliant story and I'm just so excited to get the rest of the chapters!
LainellaFay chapter 2 . 2/6/2015
I love this! This is absolutely brilliant! It's so difficult to find well-written Slytherin Hermione fics and when I saw that you wrote one, I KNEW that I had to read it because your fics are awesome and this had to be nothing less than awesome either. I was not disappointed, in fact, I was blown away by the brilliance of this fic. It's far better than what I can ever imagine for a Slytherin Hermione fic.

I love love love the Slytherin group of friends, and the inclusion of Hermione makes it 100 times better.

I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep being awesome!

- LainellaFay
Nabile chapter 2 . 2/6/2015
Hi, I'm so glad you decided to extend your drabble. I like it, I still believe is hermione because yeah she can be vindictive birds attacking Ron much? What I didn't like is the fact that pavarti took her place and for what we know she was a gossiper who loved divination, which is in a way opposite of using logic. I guess I don't like anyone taking hermione's place and succeeding at it because we know she is the brightest witch of her time. Like someone said in book one harry actually didn't have to get the stone, the stone couldn't be taken by voldemort. I guess I would like seeing what would happen without hermione's brains aiding harry and Ron.
Anyway, I overall really like it, and honestly one month? That's too long. Anyway thank you for giving us your words
LadiePhoenix007 chapter 2 . 2/6/2015
Excellent follow up to the drabble you had written and turned into the first chapter. Really happy you decided to turn this into a whole story.
ChasingDandelions chapter 2 . 2/6/2015
Absolutely loving the story so far!
I'm so glad that Hermione wasn't tormented after being sorted into Slytherin and I love how you've made Slytherins so sympathetic (and believable) in this story :)
I can't wait to read about Year Two!
Eagerly awaiting your next update! :)
BrownEyesAngel chapter 2 . 2/6/2015
Very interesting, through Parvati being the logical one surprised me. Please update soon.
AnnaOxford chapter 2 . 2/6/2015
Basically Parvati is the new Hermione now? And Hermione is even mean to Hagrid? And Theo is talking about skiving off and not being a swot. Is any trait of Hermione gonna stay, I'm afraid she's gonna be a Mary Sue.
Don't Trust The Silver Eyes chapter 2 . 2/6/2015
Aw this is so sweet. I love how they stick up for her and the little nudge of romance with the bracelet:) will every 'year' consist of 2 chapters? That would be nice. Anyway, have an awesome day hun
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