Reviews for Throw me
LilyEvansPotter chapter 1 . 12/8/2002
WOW do to this when english isn't your first language is AMAZING! It is wonderful and you are Not the only person thinks this way. Very well written.

Lils
Lavinia Lavender chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
Very good, very good. The only mistakes I noticed were in the song, but I'm not even sure if those were mistakes, because you know how lyrics can be...

Yes, very pretty indeed. Not quite as much as I like about him and Lily, not to mention it blamed her a tad too much, but that was very accurate what you said about her eyes in James's face...

-Lavinia
tima chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
I like it! Write more
Aurora Magician chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
Good job. You should consider writing a longer fic, perhaps even based on this wonderful thread you've woven. I liked it alot!
goddess of camelot chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
Wow, that was so beautiful, I was almost crying. Don't worry, your English was fine, I wouldn't have know you were Spanish if you hadn't said so at the end.

Keep up the good work.

Goddess of Camelot
Dylan S. Thompson chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
That was beautiful. You did very well for someone whose natural language isn't English. I didn't even notice. Anywayz, I hope to see some more Sev/Lily fics from you in the future, you show a lot of promise!