Reviews for Throw me
LilyEvansPotter chapter 1 . 12/8/2002
WOW do to this when english isn't your first language is AMAZING! It is wonderful and you are Not the only person thinks this way. Very well written.

Lils

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Lavinia Lavender chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
Very good, very good. The only mistakes I noticed were in the song, but I'm not even sure if those were mistakes, because you know how lyrics can be...

Yes, very pretty indeed. Not quite as much as I like about him and Lily, not to mention it blamed her a tad too much, but that was very accurate what you said about her eyes in James's face...

-Lavinia
tima chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
I like it! Write more
Aurora Magician chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
Good job. You should consider writing a longer fic, perhaps even based on this wonderful thread you've woven. I liked it alot!
goddess of camelot chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
Wow, that was so beautiful, I was almost crying. Don't worry, your English was fine, I wouldn't have know you were Spanish if you hadn't said so at the end.

Keep up the good work.

Goddess of Camelot
Dylan S. Thompson chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
That was beautiful. You did very well for someone whose natural language isn't English. I didn't even notice. Anywayz, I hope to see some more Sev/Lily fics from you in the future, you show a lot of promise!