I loved what you did with the wolves, Jacob and Alice. It felt like they stayed true to who they were meant to be like, Alice saying goodbye in person in spite of Edward. Alice should be an unstoppable force in my opinion. Jacob didn't do the pod person thing and change character completely when he wolfed out, loved that.

I liked that your Bella was good to her dad.

I actually loved your Sam as a character. His iron sense of duty. His instantaneous support of Bella when Victoria first showed up, including Emily's part. His hard line insisting Bella needed to be killed when she was changing. His explanations for his thinking. It felt military in a good way.

It was an excellent read.

I just reread this story. It is one of my favorites. I simply adore it. It's such a beautiful love story.

I was wondering how the wolves would get to Bella after she denied a friend ship with Jacob
Now that Edward is gone and Jacob is in the picture I think Bella is right
Thanks

This is a masterful work of storytelling. The way the plot lines from past present and future all weave together is a joy to read. I love the changes made to the canon plot events and I very much enjoyed Jasper's occasional POV in particular. This was a very fulfilling read.

No questions. Just sayin'... Edward is a freaking creep, stalking a little girl, he looked like a pedophile, even though she is his soulmate, this is just too creepy man.

I actually really enjoyed reading this story! Love the way you wrote it!

This is a great story - one I come back to frequently! I am very thankful that you posted the entirety of the story. Your ending is beautiful.

Yea! Bella FINALLY. brought up the fact that Jacob being able to imprint meant that they were NOT meant to be together that way and Jacob shpuld be free to find his imprint!

oookaaayyy. crying now

No negative reviews from me. i know there's going to be a rocky patch, but I'll hang in to see how it all plays out.

What a journey! up and down of emotions! Thanks again for writing and sharing

heartbreak... loving your story telling

Aaaah the anxiety of not knowing where this is going!

Aaaaaah! We knew but also... need to know what happened! Thanks for a great story so fara

Yep, leaving those tqo alone should have been a big no... they put too much faith in the visions, hehe.