|Reviews for Batman in the Soup|
| Aurelia30 chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
Not quite the way I remember the '60s version of Batman, which I grew up with. The Mayor's name was Mayor Linseed, BTW. This was more a conglomeration of the '60s show, the movies, and Gotham.
The story was OK, the grammar very good. But, if you were trying to stick with the '60s version, you missed the mark. If it was a conglomeration, that's a bit different. The language was a bit courser than I'm used to with Batman, even with Gotham. All-in-all, I DID like the story, but if you're trying to stay true to one style, you need to pick the one you want and stick with it. This didn't fit that bill. I may not have hit the mark on what you were trying to do, though. If that's the case, I apologize. I just found it a bit unsettling as I thought you were going for the '60s style.