Reviews for You're my Density
Guest chapter 25 . 3/16
Just have to say this. It’s colleagues not colleges. I have seen this spelling mistake twice in a couple of paragraphs. Sorry for this review. I really really like this story.
Darknessdawns chapter 33 . 3/14
So for the official review, I absolutely loved this story. The 'Back to the Future' jokes worked extremely well as a running theme. I also really liked how similar yet different Harry was after growing up in a loving environment, even if it was due to a Ministry memory scramble. Harry's reactions to things cracked me up. He definitely wasn't afraid to speak his mind but also thought things through. Another thing I loved about this piece was how things changed. That was quite the snowball effect. I was actually left curious about how much things continued to change after Voldemort had been taken care of. At any rate, this was a lovely piece that I absolutely enjoyed. Thank you for taking the time to write and share it
Darknessdawns chapter 1 . 3/11
Oh, it appears that I haven't left a review on this story. I know I read it. I know I loved it. I just don't know what happened to the review. Most likely it has been lost to the void due to a phone glitch, which is tragic. Never fear! As I will happily read this piece again and try to leave another review!
Corwyn chapter 33 . 1/20
Beautiful story! I loved the "wrapping it up in that same uni bar" touch. Thank you ever so much for sharing it with us.
Shadeymankey chapter 6 . 1/10
Yeah no. No redeeming them will EVER be okay. You can have good dursleys if they START good, but changing after 10 years will NEVER be okay. I will hate that part of this story the entire time I read it, but I’m enjoying the rest so I’ll just skim these parts
Jaoheah chapter 33 . 1/9
Love the story.
Jaoheah chapter 29 . 1/9
Is voldie now Obliviated? LOL
Jaoheah chapter 15 . 1/8
Amy* not Ami.
moodyboy66 chapter 26 . 12/27/2022
I too enjoy the fuck off curse
ran chapter 7 . 12/11/2022
couldn't think of a plan to free sirius. okay then, wait an extra 2 years then. Telling the grangers when u spent so much time saying that harry couldn't learn anything because she took an oath not to tell him without good enough mind protection. wat. Then there is the whole if people find out your a time traveler they completely wipe your memories thing, so why did they tell the grangers again... the silencing spell is just a plot contrivance for a scene you wanted to write. Same with harry reacting like that. Perhaps he could still flip out about killing someone at 11 or whatever, and the reactions of staff to it, but not the angsty shit.
ran chapter 2 . 12/11/2022
gotta love the 2 second fights. not. can't a guy be angry for more than 5 seconds before appolagiseing. or maybe not apologise for shit that ain't his fault.
Guest chapter 22 . 12/2/2022
Might be the greyest chapter yet even though it serves a very necessary purpose. Still I wonder if this is a "Greater Good" scenario for the travelers, even though we know (from our perspective & certain known actions by the protagonists) that Malfoy...both of them...will not change or reform. Still, making rogue canon in its execution but applied in this way has a small shade of ambiguity there. I love it though because I hate evil & want to see it thoroughly grasping at straws & gasping for air.

I can't wait until Snivellus reappears, if he does, and what his interactions in this new magical Britain will be like.

I'm fully immersed in this story & was only planning on some light" reading when I found it. I'm quite pleased that I can peruse this at very liberal & leisure pace, knowing that it is completed. You have a very nice touch in writing & I'm looking forward to checking out your works, as well as some on your favorites list.

Guest chapter 16 . 12/2/2022
I didn't think I'd get so comfortable with the idea of Petunia actually realizing part of her issues & coming into caring about Harry. But you really swung the pendulum in a way that I can accept it. I got a little emotional at this chapter because I have a certain relatable situation when it comes to feeling unwanted or cast aside by parts of my family when I was younger :-*(

Once I finish your story, I might search for a premise similar to what you have set in motion here, with Harry's aunt (and eventually Vernon & Dudley) actually becoming Harry's family. I hope that you don't eventually have one of them getting attacked by the Death Eaters and/or dying though (especially not Petinia). Once again, very good story you have written.

Guest chapter 7 . 12/1/2022
My only problem here is how "in control" writers try to make one or both of Hermione's parents seem. I mean, there's quite literally NOTHING a muggle could do to stop a witch or wizard (both having permission to use magic outside of school, btw) if they saw fit to stay in Britain or Hogwarts for an extended time.

Stuff like tgat always just makes Hermione's father look like some type of a bad American parody (Major Stumped or something) rather than some serious type of"alpha" personality.

Other than that...I haven't got much to really knock about this story.
I am enjoying this so far.
annette-ella chapter 33 . 12/3/2022
Great Story
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