Reviews for You're my Density
Guest chapter 28 . 11/28/2022
Very well done.
Guest chapter 23 . 11/28/2022
Why did they seem okay letting scum like Lockhart just leave to continue ruining lives by abusing his memory charm?
Guest chapter 22 . 11/28/2022
Great story and a sweet couple.
Guest chapter 20 . 11/27/2022
Thought Hermione was going to tell Dumbles and with them all together say what they know. Having said things changed so much it wouldnt matter anymore. That didnt happen though.

Heck of a story.
Guest chapter 19 . 11/27/2022
Actually like seeing a version of Petunia like this. Always find her past depressing. How miserable that would actually be. No excuse in the slightest for the treatment of Harry. Just saying that's depressing.
Guest chapter 17 . 11/27/2022
The Goblet of Fire couldve been a nightmare if Voldy got his hands on it and decided to elect his enemies to arrive and participate at locations of his choosing. I havent seen any stories touching on such a tragedy. Harry would be the first target and likely succeed stripping him of his magic or killing him with ease.
Guest chapter 17 . 11/27/2022
Was honestly hoping Narcissa would actually go to Sirius and nip this in the bud. Instead it's going in the opposite direction and seeing her damned with her shitty husband that likely produced their sons shotty personality that hes now blaming Narcissa for.
Guest chapter 17 . 11/27/2022
Kinda lost why it's only first and second years. Doesnt that leave all the others kinda screwed on the info?

Or is it going to be mandatory for those and others can take it?
Guest chapter 15 . 11/27/2022
I'd see about giving it to the Flamels directly if possible.
Guest chapter 14 . 11/27/2022
Great move at the end. Dont think I've ever seen a play like that one. At least not that early if anything.
Guest chapter 13 . 11/27/2022
Shouldve just called Amelia to go after him during the break or ambushing him at his bedroom. Say they heard him talking to his Lord and found theres a face on the back of his head.

I hope the Basilisk is handled near the beginning of the year. Only because I could see them possibly waiting till the book has been obtained so they know where it would end up going if it didnt ho to Ginny this time. Assuming it even went to the school in the first place.

Putting livesay risk assuming everyone will be lucky again with petrifications would be outright idiocy. Though many authors force that no matter how much they change the story.

Don't know why Neville had to be a dumbass and tell the gossip queens about that info. Hope they lay into him doing that.

Frankly sad it looks like he may end up with one of them instead of Hannah. She'll likely cause him a bunch of unneeded trouble with her personality.
Guest chapter 12 . 11/26/2022
Confusion here. Does she not realize this is obviously a test for Harry to face Voldy? I think Dumbles even heads to the ministry on broom of all things.

Is there a reason not to at least tell Dumbles he has a summons coming that would likely be fake?
Guest chapter 12 . 11/26/2022
Mcgonagalls argument makes no sense when Bole outright said the team was told to attack him. That it was basically an hit.
amsev chapter 8 . 11/27/2022
Delighted to be reading this story again. So many fascinating twists and turns. Thank you for writing!
Guest chapter 4 . 11/25/2022
Extremely depressing stuff and hate that the ones left behind dont suffer horribly for it and are dealt with.

Great story but hate that part very much.
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