Reviews for You're my Density
miguel.puentedejesus chapter 5 . 4/15/2020
Me Encanto!
De Verdad Perfecto
miguel.puentedejesus chapter 3 . 4/15/2020
Me Encanto M
miguel.puentedejesus chapter 1 . 4/15/2020
Un Increíble Comienzo!
Me Encanto
themadmartian chapter 15 . 4/15/2020
While I'm not a big fan of Petunia Dursley, this is a nice change from the usual fare that is out there.
cliffdweller chapter 33 . 4/13/2020
Very enjoyable take on the Potter Universe.
Kushka chapter 33 . 4/11/2020
Great story
LordRhyolith chapter 33 . 4/12/2020
Overall a really nice story that isn't just retelling cannon with an overpowered Harry & Hermi couple. I liked all the changes you made and that Dumbledore was willing to listen to other people. And what you did to the Dursleys. Draco's and Cissa's fate was also quite nice, it appears that they can be relatively decent people without the influence of that scumbag Lucious.
LordRhyolith chapter 11 . 4/11/2020
WTF did your dobby just seduce the Malfoy elf into acting as an agent for him?! XD
Aredianx chapter 4 . 4/9/2020
This was such a wonderful chapter. I just realized i've never read a strong and good dumbledore who takes actions. Really enjoying this so far.
Guest chapter 33 . 4/6/2020
still going stuff moving into Harry Crow next you make quarantine You as always
jules3677 chapter 33 . 4/6/2020
Thoroughly enjoyed reading your entertaining story. Impressed with how you weaved canon into your plot. Liked the incidents that you introduced to create change to a magical British society. Thank you.
Violet Chloe Snow chapter 22 . 4/2/2020
I always felt bad for Narcissa. She got a real bad hand, with a husband and son like those two.
RightnWrong chapter 33 . 3/27/2020
Sigh, I so love this story. I’m always sad when I reach the end. Thank you so much for writing it!
RightnWrong chapter 26 . 3/26/2020
God I love this story so much - going through my third reading, seems I read it each year-isn and love it every single time.

"You told the dark one to leave Hogwarts and perform a sex act on himself? Harry Potter is indeed a great wizard." - this had me rolling in laughter, each time, lol.

I also cried when dumbledore died. It’s a testament to your writing how much that hurt me, and how much I hoped three turns meant a time turner that would save the day. Once I Saw it was for real, I clearly remember feeling numb, despondent really. By the third time through, I’m still shocked to see a few tears threatened to escape.

There were so many things I didn’t like such as the nearly spoiled brat attitude of you do what I want or I leave Britain, which I’ll admit it was a matter of perception, since it IS the sane choice, but Hermione really owed dumbledore to stay and fight until things got pretty bad. However me not liking it doesn’t mean it wasn’t a masterful piece to create tension, and it gets all brilliantly resolved after the funeral once harry realizes there’s no hiding, at least not while keeping your sanity as the laments and blood of innocents flows around you.

Normally I’m not so detailed in my praise. I usually would just thank you for writing my favourite time traveler and one of my favourite good dumbledore stories, but it occurred to me that you might enjoy reading it :) as such I couldn’t wait until the end to add these comments lest I forget enough detail to make them worthwhile.

Anyway, thanks so much for writing this story ! :)
shadewolfedrt chapter 33 . 3/26/2020
This is a great story and the memory removal I would love to see done just to get Riddle out of the way. And It gave me an idea what it Harry got a Phoenix at the Headmasters funeral right has Fawkes left.
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