Reviews for You're my Density
blacksistrs chapter 16 . 11/3/2023
I love this story, but at the same time it really angers me how after abusing Harry for YEARS, the Dursleys can benefit from his wealth and safety.

It almost makes me want to not read.

The fact that they suddenly accept Harry because of his money and the safety he provides is truly f*ckd up.

Thats not love, is interest.

You malnourish a child, abuse him, denies him love..:
Then 5 thousand pounds and safety makes you being ok with him?

Sorry, no.
Charlee56 chapter 29 . 11/2/2023
Although the "Fawkes Solution" should've been a complete giveaway in curing Hermione here, I'm really and truly sorry to my bones that Harry didn't find Snape in a massive bit of magick using Fawkes and then beating the answers out of him.
Now THAT would have been EPIC!
Great story, by the way.
Charlee56 chapter 25 . 10/31/2023
Am reading your opus right through, but ; "showing everyone their METRAL".
After checking Merriam-Webster and Wiki Def both on-line very carefully, I am sorry to have to correct your grammatic error.
There is no such word as "metral". After re-reading the pertinent passage, it occurred to me that you were most likely looking for the word "METTLE".
Please do check out my findings and if you wish, please do make the necessary correction.
And this story is fantastic!
llewtwo chapter 33 . 10/31/2023
Lovely story! I loved the resolution, lol! Never liked Lockheart more!
Charlee56 chapter 2 . 10/27/2023
I'm gonna be just a weeee liddow biddofa grammar nazi here.
There is no such word as "orientated".
One may become ORIENTED, or a friend could orient you in the right direction. But one cannot become disorientated.
This is a fairly common mistake, but a mistake it surely is. I dont expect any corrections since this very good story was first published in 2016, seven years ago from now.
But! Going forward, I do hope that this constructively intended criticism heips.
Otherwise, this is a well-written and really good story. And now I'm going to climb down from my soap box and get back to reading!
Asta0213 chapter 3 . 10/19/2023
Hagrid. Holy….. that was dark. I’ve read some pretty messed up things in fics. But that hit different.
Aetherium21 chapter 28 . 10/4/2023
How strange, a knife in the hand of those parents is a very lackluster way to make the murder successful. Baffled that snape didnt do something potion based and lethal
Aetherium21 chapter 26 . 10/4/2023
Ahahahahaha im dead. The “fuck off curse”, held in deep admiration by our elven friends
Guest chapter 26 . 9/15/2023
I LOVE the FO curse and the pillowcase analogue!
l30rusty chapter 9 . 9/9/2023
I thought only fyndfire could damage the hat
l30rusty chapter 9 . 9/9/2023
Why aren't they bringing back his memories?
give a pain relief potion
he gains years of Hogwarts tuition
Shadeymankey chapter 2 . 8/25/2023
Yeaaahhhhh still enjoy this story on a re-read byt Fhelping the dursley’s. Child abuse NEEDS punished, not “forgiven.”
Something Random 52 chapter 17 . 7/29/2023
Thanks for making Neville such a fuckin badass in this story
Something Random 52 chapter 13 . 7/28/2023
YYEEEEEAAAAAAAHHHHH NEVILLEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
lulu2613 chapter 27 . 7/8/2023
What?!
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