Reviews for Denial
ChikaiItachi chapter 6 . 9/27/2016
Thanks for another great chapter. I like that we're slowly seeing development of the demon world and Satan's family. And those painkillers, man... haha
ChikaiItachi chapter 5 . 9/8/2016
I couldn't stop laughing at this chapter's extra scene. I feel like it takes talent to intentionally write so badly... and yet, it made just enough sense for me to follow most of it. Thanks for another well-written chapter and a hilarious extra scene.
ChikaiItachi chapter 4 . 9/8/2016
Cute chapter! Very fitting Bible reference, since Yuri "said no." Though, the verse is kind of ironic too, since they're obviously going to "do it" together at some point. x)
ChikaiItachi chapter 3 . 9/1/2016
I loved it! Now we are getting more into characterization, it seems. Satan is hilarious as always. I loved the part where Yuri asks him questions to see if he has Depression. xD
ChikaiItachi chapter 2 . 8/23/2016
Well written and hilarious again. I like the mix of humor and suspense. I love the image of the Demon King as a sociopathic "metrosexual" with a jeweled rapier. x) One other thing. I don't know how strict this site is or if they bother to take stories down, but just in case, it might be a good idea to change the Fucks and Whores to some configuration of letters and ***. Or you might raise the rating to M to lower the chances of anyone tattling on you for expletives in a T story. But regardless, this is great, and I plan to keep reading. P.S. The extra scene was very sweet... except I suspect Satan of slipping poison in that cocoa... xD
ChikaiItachi chapter 1 . 7/29/2016
Hilarious. I don't picture Satan or Gehenna that way, but your idea for them works a lot better for creating humor.
CrystalOfTime chapter 4 . 12/26/2015
Yaay new chapter!
Maxkumura chapter 3 . 9/21/2015
Omg amazing story! :D
CrystalOfTime chapter 3 . 9/20/2015
hahahahaha! that extra scene is funny! All in all, awesome job! love the story
Guest chapter 2 . 9/11/2015
I looooove this fanfic it's just ssoooooo coool looking forward to next chapter
Update soon pls
Faisalliot chapter 2 . 8/11/2015
"Don't you get shit on your tail? Seeing as it's close to your bum..."
Thats...thats actually a pretty legit question there...
*pant pant*
Okay... I'm done... Now I... should probably go... and ask Rin...Because that's...a legitimate question.
Thank you Yuri for your insight.
Faisalliot chapter 1 . 8/11/2015
kill yourself
no, that took me 3.6 seconds, but whatever!
I read this and was like "Well now what do I do with my life."
Absoultely love this.
I loved how you portray Yuri XD
CrystalOfTime chapter 2 . 8/9/2015
I read it all! Awesum story!1
CrystalOfTime chapter 1 . 8/9/2015
lisa chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
i loved this its so cute i hope you update more
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