Reviews for The Broken Hero |
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![]() ![]() ![]() And to all the people out there making fun of this story,you are the reason the world is turning the way it is,to little compassion and to little giving of courage to keep on going . |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the first review in a whole year,time flies I know right,but rest easy at night knowing you have filled others life with joy and helping them by making amazing stories for others to read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really broken? Thats pretty pathetic |
![]() ![]() Your grammar sucks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully made, exceptionally funny when needed. Do try to write your own novel. I support you wholeheartedly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() dirty percy lmao? |
![]() ![]() ![]() broken..? that's just so needlessly edgy lmao. so unbelievably and unimaginably edgy. the naginata was very cool tho, most people just give mc's katanas and leave it at that but you had him forge a different type of weapon. now I wanna see a pick of an adult heating wielding it |
![]() ![]() wrong grammar again...duh! |
![]() ![]() Wrong grammar...but a pretty nice story! |
![]() ![]() its knew not know in PAST TENSE |
![]() ![]() ![]() CONTINUEEE(ʕ•ٹ•ʔ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im sorry, i usually NEVER flame a fanfic before, but the first chapter had me cringing ngl, with everyone just staring at Percy fighting a primordial being and Nico being ooc. Over the top cringe |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHAHAHHAHAHAH poor Percy he just wanted the best for grace. |
![]() ![]() tehe |
![]() ![]() wow |