Reviews for The Broken Hero |
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![]() ![]() amazing! |
![]() ![]() Well that happened |
![]() ![]() Why do you have to leave so many clifthangers!? You are creul! Update or else ... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, cool. Did he really kill her? Doesn't seem like it o.o |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing! Awaiting the next chapter like a kid does Christmas! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...WICKED...seriously how do you come up with this stuff its just AWESOME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. My. Gods... Um... I'm not sure how to react to this chapter... lol. Ok... well, grest chapter. Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was that Drew or Aphrodite? It became impossible to tell when Aphrodite showed her lack of common sense by offering herself or Drew to Percy when she knows he's taken. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NOOO! you can't end it there! That's just cruel. Other than that, this chapter was indeed EPIC! I can't wait to see what actually happened. Knowing Percy, he probably didn't kill her, but did something that would make her wet herself and humiliate her in front of everyone. Keep up the wonderful work, and please post again soon! Good Luck, and Good Writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm, ya'know, it's possible he shot Aphrodite instead for what she said. But it could just be Drew. And when did I miss that part of the Percy Jackson series? Is it in a short story somewhere? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really dude cliffhanger not cool bro not cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow well that works... Great chapter here mate, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Epic story , and i almost feel sorry for that roman |
![]() ![]() Dude you need to update faster and that was such a good chap now befor I go you need to make longer chapters see you next chap |
![]() ![]() good one please make more quickly they are amazing ps |