Reviews for The Broken Hero |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loving the story so far! Hope to see another soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, cant wait for the next :-) |
![]() ![]() Why would Kronos tell him that? He wouldn't want him to know that. Btw Percy should have some sniper rifle. Perching on some roof and then blame launches a bullet right in some monsters head. Btw not much of an assassin is he? Pretty sure assassins dont walk up to to people and say "hey I'm going to kill you!" and say his name and everything |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, Very Nice! I am glad that Jason came to his senses, Blessing Pery was not something I expected. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okkkk. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. I think that you. Should have a harem of Artemis, Gaea, Hera and Rhea so that Percy has the queens of the three previous ages along side him. This would be because the person that defeated Kronor and make him fade would become the king of Olympus. When this happened Gaea would be released from a spell put on her by Kronos that made her act evil. |
![]() ![]() make this pertimis it would suit it more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm... that's interesting. I like your idea, certainly. Gaea isn't dead, right? Keep writing! :) |
![]() ![]() This is amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story, bro. Overused memes aside, it's a pretty nice story. Would be awesome if you made this Pertemis, since there's a serious lack of original Pertemis stories out there. This one has some unique elements to it, namely Percy's...condition and the way he was invited into the hunt. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the new percy. he's basically a dc comics super hero. combination aqualad and cyborg. adding he's now an assassin is even better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey this story is amazing! Please update asap |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was AWESOME! I can't wait to see how this plays out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like this story |