Reviews for The Broken Hero
Gibson1014 chapter 5 . 2/25/2015
Loving the story so far! Hope to see another soon.
Thundercade chapter 4 . 2/19/2015
Great chapter, cant wait for the next :-)
ImmortalThunder chapter 4 . 2/18/2015
Why would Kronos tell him that? He wouldn't want him to know that. Btw Percy should have some sniper rifle. Perching on some roof and then blame launches a bullet right in some monsters head. Btw not much of an assassin is he? Pretty sure assassins dont walk up to to people and say "hey I'm going to kill you!" and say his name and everything
JustLucky05 chapter 4 . 2/18/2015
Nice, Very Nice! I am glad that Jason came to his senses, Blessing Pery was not something I expected. Great job!
Gabriel H. Sapphire chapter 4 . 2/18/2015
Okkkk.
rider-84 chapter 4 . 2/18/2015
Great chapter. I think that you. Should have a harem of Artemis, Gaea, Hera and Rhea so that Percy has the queens of the three previous ages along side him. This would be because the person that defeated Kronor and make him fade would become the king of Olympus. When this happened Gaea would be released from a spell put on her by Kronos that made her act evil.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/18/2015
make this pertimis it would suit it more
Phaloscen chapter 1 . 2/18/2015
Hm... that's interesting. I like your idea, certainly. Gaea isn't dead, right?

Keep writing! :)
S.M.Y.D chapter 4 . 2/18/2015
This is amazing!
Ash the Aura Guardian chapter 3 . 2/17/2015
Cool story, bro.

Overused memes aside, it's a pretty nice story. Would be awesome if you made this Pertemis, since there's a serious lack of original Pertemis stories out there. This one has some unique elements to it, namely Percy's...condition and the way he was invited into the hunt.
Son of Tyche chapter 3 . 2/13/2015
Nice chapters
Wade98 chapter 3 . 2/12/2015
I like the new percy. he's basically a dc comics super hero. combination aqualad and cyborg. adding he's now an assassin is even better.
Achilles risen chapter 3 . 2/12/2015
Hey this story is amazing! Please update asap
JustLucky05 chapter 3 . 2/12/2015
That was AWESOME! I can't wait to see how this plays out.
symbiote2254 chapter 3 . 2/12/2015
i really like this story
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