Percy a half cyborg, really? I mean come on! However, while I applaud your creativity but this is so far outside the norm that it's not even funny as such I have lost interest in this story no offense but this story and those like it just don't interest me.

um he is also his brother in law. son. father in law. nephew in law. and grand father in-law. I think Percy wins

*threatening tone* You will update this story now.
*sweet voice* Please.

Update this story soon

yeah that's probably for the wisest if you don't ask about the hot spring

CAN you continue the story please because I found that it’s a Good concept

This was a fantastic read well done

Noooooo! Why did you stop?!

needs and epilogue

Hey
You should
Probably
Update

please fast update
please fast update
please fast update

Not "consummating". Consummating implies sex.
Instead, use "Consuming". This means using, eating, or burning.

AWESOME. I love this take to story, and the inclusion of Gaia. I'm eager to see where this story goes as it continues. I know it's been years since you've updated, but I hope you haven't dropped this fic. It's really good so far and I'm really looking forward to more or the story. I hope you're able to update soon! Happy writing! :)

I loved the first chapter of this story, however, I'm not so sure about the second. I do like the mechanical parts, but personally I'm not sure if Percy would cal himself a 'monster' just because of it. He couldve seen it as a way to remember Charles.
Second, I believe his mood swing to Angey was...too abrupt, It wasn't really believable to me.
Also the Laughing on the floor, plus Jason's anger.
However, I do get that that could be explained by a missing bit of his brain, but still...
Anyway, just giving you my thoughts, hope you take them into account!
You're still a great writer, very descriptive. Hope it goes well from here!
~Llew

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