Reviews for The Broken Hero |
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![]() ![]() CONTINUE PLZ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why can’t he convince posiedon to help Medusa? She was a normal girl before so... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chaos’ direct interference allowing Kronos and Gaea or Gaia to reform so fast is what I’m going to choose to believe as the reason for why they came back so fast when it took millennia for them the last time. |
![]() ![]() This fanfic is SO good! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is absolutely the best fanfic story i have read on any fanfic websites in the three years i have been reading fanfiction. can you please continue it i would really appreciate it thanks. (; but if you can't or don't want to can you at least let someone who you think is good enough adopt it and continue it. but i would really prefer you to do the writing. peace |
![]() ![]() More chapters pls it's a very good story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww i need this |
![]() ![]() Good story but I think line breaks are necessary to help everyone out. |
![]() ![]() Did he seriously just fucking not only give up all his freedom, join the company of people who wanted to TORTURE HIM for just BEING NEAR THEM, but also then ask her to call him FUCKING BROKEN? WHAT IS HE? A GOD DAMN REMOTE? He's an intelligent human being. Who hates... HATES...Having no say in his Destiny. But oh sure, I'll swear eternal loyalty to you, and ask you to treat me like a slave. Cause DERP, IM ROBO PERCY Honestly... The reaction should have been more of a " Ahh hello Artemis! Yes, I'll let your Hunter go, but I want to ask, is this normal behavior for your hunters? KIDNAPPING GUYS WHO INVESTIGATE SOUNDS NEARBY AND THEN GOING ON TO TORTURE THEM?! BECAUSE IF SO WE NEED TO FUCKING TALK!" |
![]() ![]() No no no no no no no no did I mention no |
![]() ![]() ![]() HESTIA BURNN |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love is exactly how I would think sally would react to her soon doing that. I can't wait until you update this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its clear your writing has gotten better over time, so perhaps it would be a good idea to revisit a few chapters and clean them up and I guess pretty them up. Its a bad ass story, just needs a bit of tweaking to convey that bad assry |