Nicely done! I like how you explain this plot hole and connect the dots to Balem’s whispery voice. That makes a lot of sense!

Nice idea, and it does fit Cain's personality and skills very well. I always hoped that they'd let us know who and why but your version works

This was a very powerful peice. I enjoyed each perspective! You did a good job capturing them all. :)

This is great. It was very much what I was thinking in my mind. I felt that Caine smelled the queen's death on Balem and that is why he tore his throat out. Bravo! Loved it!

Cool. :) Thanks for sharing. xo

love it! :)

This is fantastic. Not just your inventive, completely plausible idea, but the way you executed each person's view and voice so well. Thank you for writing and sharing this.
Agreed: headcannon accepted. Which, if we're honest, is the ff reader's highest form of praise.

I love the idea of who Caine bit and why, I was very intrigued and wanting to know and I think your idea fits perfectly into the story, and may even explain why Balem always spoke softly (except for during his hissy fits). Keep writing.

Makes PERFECT sense, going to be headcanon from now on! Nice work!

Cute at the end :) Though I think in the movie they said that he'd killed the person he bit.
Still, well written

This is makes more sense then movie. The whisper everything.

Yes! Go Caine! And I like why that would explain Balem's voice. Great story!

Aww this was very sweet!

How sweet! Caine was my absolute favorite part of the movie so fan fics that fill in things about him are awesome! So thanks!

I really love this explanation, and this is very well written. Thanks for sharing!