Reviews for On The Line
StingBean chapter 48 . 3/19
This story is so compelling. I read it years ago but with the social distancing I came back. I know from your authors notes that thing are not easy for you and your family. I hope you are in a better place now than when you started this story... Any chance we will ever get to see the last third of the story?
Guest chapter 48 . 3/7
Miss this fic.
onlybelieved chapter 47 . 12/28/2019
Just re-read this again and PLEASE finish this story. aufs so good and gripping and i have so many questions that need to be answered! Of all the stories that ive read that have been abandoned this is one of the few that I just can’t seem to let go of.
Pretty please?
AtLoveForTwilight chapter 1 . 8/30/2019
Ok I know it’s been a teensy bit over 2 years but I am 1000% rooting for you to finish this story. I am invested into it from my very core! Can’t wait for your next update!
P.s
Didn’t know that once you review one chapter you couldn’t do it again?
AtLoveForTwilight chapter 47 . 8/30/2019
In this world, I think what keeps them both alive is the knowledge that beneath their covers they can count on one another no matter how bad things get. So I understand how Bella felt about how Masen had lied. What do you do when the one person in that world you can trust shatters? Maybe I’m digging too deep, I don’t know. Excellent imagery as usual !
AtLoveForTwilight chapter 17 . 8/30/2019
Hello, rereading again and WOW! Chills on this last scene. You’re such an amazing and vivid writer. Bella making her transition into Marie, I LOVE IT !
SBennett chapter 48 . 6/27/2019
Thank you for such an interesting story. Makes you really think. Hope you can finish it, would love to read the rest.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/25/2019
I love this story! Very well written and so emotionally challenging. Hope you will be able to finish it sometime (soon) : )
Guest chapter 36 . 5/7/2019
visage? lmao. get a better thesaurus!
twimima7 chapter 48 . 1/4/2019
Hoping for a new update in the New Year and can't help to reread this chapter of torture Bella had to endure on Zafrina and herself. If she ever gets out of this alive she needs to kick Edward in the groin!
moonwinks chapter 48 . 12/30/2018
The absence of this story has left a gaping hole in the fanfiction collection. Please finish it!
LAB1 chapter 48 . 11/24/2018
Oh, I didn't realize that this story wasn't finished! I hope you are able to come back soon. I still can't get that 911 call out of my head from when she first became Marie. Totally chilling!
Theendproductions chapter 48 . 11/13/2018
so well written, I do hope you continue the story
Guest chapter 48 . 10/9/2018
Wow. This is amazing. I’ve just binge-read the whole thing and I love it. Please keep updating!
wypiera chapter 48 . 8/19/2018
I have been pulled in by these characters and can't wait to see where this goes. Will you be continuing with the story?
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