Reviews for On The Line
tas62 chapter 48 . 4/6/2017
Wow, I can't believe Edward would just let her go.
ginkgo00 chapter 48 . 4/6/2017
Thank you
19-twilight-fan-93 chapter 48 . 4/6/2017
Your stories are always such a pleasure to read! Can't wait to see what the next chapter will bring!
JulieToo chapter 48 . 4/6/2017
I enjoyed the reprieve of butterflies from the torture and brutality of the last chapter. Wondering what Masen/Cullen is negotiating? Is he shedding Bella/Marie to bring in re-enforcements? I hope time flies so the next chapter comes quickly!
NeeNee246 chapter 48 . 4/6/2017
OH MY! They are trying to break her! I think it is working. :(
roxiegirl chapter 48 . 4/6/2017
Thank you. Omg. Volturi is batshit crazy.
lca5 chapter 48 . 4/6/2017
So freak
eliza41 chapter 48 . 4/6/2017
Is he delusional? Or wicked smart?
dpennell007 chapter 48 . 4/6/2017
She's no where near done, and it's already a nightmare she may never be able to forget.
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 48 . 4/6/2017
OMG! Marcus killed the butterfly? I think he was sending a message to Bella. And I am dying to hear the conversation between Edward and Bella as to what happened in the room.

And where is Edward going?
Elise de Sallier chapter 48 . 4/6/2017
Poor Bella. I couldn't begin to imagine doing what she is doing. My guess is Marcus is just the figurehead with Aro secretly in charge. His buffoon act is a good cover to get people to drop their guard around him.
Thank you for another wonderfully written chapter.
bonnie62 chapter 48 . 4/6/2017
Thanks so much!
LaPumuckl chapter 48 . 4/6/2017
That was creepy
grandmachix chapter 48 . 4/6/2017
Marcus Volturi is an evil animal. He killed the butterfly as a warning to Marie not to try to escape. Where is Cullen? Has he abandoned her?
Judy
guest chapter 48 . 4/6/2017
I am still upset bella wasshocked
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