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Well that was some sexy roleplay. I look forward to the next chapter! I had forgotten that you planned to continue this.

Yes! Garchomp chapter! It needs to happen! If you still have the muse to write it that is, don't force yourself if you can't figure out where to take it.

Can we please see you do a chapter with Garchomp? It feels like that's something that needs to be added.

pretty good threesome.
next want gavin all holes fucked and filled by some males

Really? Diggersby? One of the most disgusting Pokemon plus gay content? Can't even put a small disclaimer at the start that there's gay content in later chapters?

The unexpected turnaround was what made me REALLY like this. A lot actually.

Now tell me this.

How many just shake their head at the sight of two guys go at it like this-let alone one of them not human ?

You'll get a lot. Ignore them and just keep on writing.

Moncheli!

Very nice chapter. Quite enjoyable.

good chapters.
especially when rhydon fuck gavin.
i want more lemon with gavin taken by dominant male.
next time i would like to see tentacles and vines fucking and filling all gavin holes until he look pregnant, and maybe having few oviposition.

Plz continoue the story or r u dead

Sorry, I'm in school and don't feel like logging on. :P

But this was a good one. Had all the right details and made sure to emphasize the right parts. And you know it's definitely a good one if you get a hard-on. ;)

Moncheli!

-Knight of the Smut Table, The Bloody Seje

I dunno why the guest review didn't show. :P

I stand by what I said; this was good, if not awesome, if it was able to arouse me.

You had the details right, none overbearing. The flow wasn't disrupted despite the changes in P.O.V.

Keep up the good work in both fields of a lemon!

Moncheli!

-Knight of the Smut Table, The Bloody Seje

well I must say that this is quite the interesting chapter. I await more to come.

Will Gavin top his male pokemon or will the male pokemon top him? Or both? If he has two male pokemon it can be both at once! X3

Could you make a story between Meowth & Pikachu where Meowth is the only one that can talk, but we're able to understand Pikachu through Meowth's words? (Be it through repetition or acknowledgement.. like in the show.)

That would make my dreams come true since they're the only recurring pokemon throughout the entire show.
You could watch these episodes for inspiration: Bound for Trouble, and A Scare to Remember

BTW I really liked this chapter. Can't wait for the next one.