|Reviews for Second Wind|
| Llllllll chapter 1 . 9/26
pacing is slow
| RunOnSentences chapter 22 . 9/16
Eh. It was sort of the only plot twist you could add and it was predictable. This isn’t the first nor the only nor the last story to use that particular “surprise”
| jbadillodavila chapter 1 . 9/14
| chargerport chapter 69 . 8/18
Its a great story, thank you for writing it.
On another note, i love how the current last words of the fic were sengoku thinking about how uselesss moria is
| Uncle Dork chapter 69 . 8/19
Man, I hope that sometime in the future the stars align to the point you an update this again
| Red guy 2q2 chapter 69 . 8/19
I hope you get out of Hiatus soon and update
| Uncle Dork chapter 36 . 8/19
Oh yeah, Mr Krabs
| Uncle Dork chapter 31 . 8/19
| Uncle Dork chapter 11 . 8/18
Did I use this chapter as an excuse to play Overtaken? Yes. Did it enhance the chapter? Also yes.
| Uncle Dork chapter 3 . 8/18
| UnholyBlood chapter 56 . 8/17
... The Goa Canon part is just absolute pure gold and I love everything about it... Making Sunny as a reincarnation is literally the best thing ever. I love this fic. Lol
| sneakyshiva chapter 69 . 8/12
It's an awesome story. Thank you so much for that.
| Tibki chapter 69 . 8/11
Just did my first full re-read since like 2015 and holy *crap* is this amazing!
Completely understand re: hiatus though. IRL problems take precedence, take all the time you need! The amount of work and it’s quality speaks for itself
| ZiraelAragorn chapter 3 . 8/10
| saiyan hatake chapter 25 . 8/3
did no one else think of gaara tho? he does have a blue eye haha