Reviews for Second Wind
Llllllll chapter 1 . 9/26
pacing is slow
RunOnSentences chapter 22 . 9/16
Eh. It was sort of the only plot twist you could add and it was predictable. This isn’t the first nor the only nor the last story to use that particular “surprise”
jbadillodavila chapter 1 . 9/14
Buena historia
chargerport chapter 69 . 8/18
Its a great story, thank you for writing it.

On another note, i love how the current last words of the fic were sengoku thinking about how uselesss moria is
Uncle Dork chapter 69 . 8/19
Man, I hope that sometime in the future the stars align to the point you an update this again
Red guy 2q2 chapter 69 . 8/19
I hope you get out of Hiatus soon and update
Uncle Dork chapter 36 . 8/19
Oh yeah, Mr Krabs
Uncle Dork chapter 31 . 8/19
Spicy indeed
Uncle Dork chapter 11 . 8/18
Did I use this chapter as an excuse to play Overtaken? Yes. Did it enhance the chapter? Also yes.
Uncle Dork chapter 3 . 8/18
lmao rip
UnholyBlood chapter 56 . 8/17
... The Goa Canon part is just absolute pure gold and I love everything about it... Making Sunny as a reincarnation is literally the best thing ever. I love this fic. Lol
sneakyshiva chapter 69 . 8/12
It's an awesome story. Thank you so much for that.
Tibki chapter 69 . 8/11
Just did my first full re-read since like 2015 and holy *crap* is this amazing!

Completely understand re: hiatus though. IRL problems take precedence, take all the time you need! The amount of work and it’s quality speaks for itself
ZiraelAragorn chapter 3 . 8/10
HAHAHAHAHAH LMAO
saiyan hatake chapter 25 . 8/3
did no one else think of gaara tho? he does have a blue eye haha
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