Reviews for True harry
lilyflower101 chapter 11 . 6/12
Guest up there was right. Nothing in this story so far has caught my interest. As for his comment on the author note and your response, its against fan fiction . net rules to have them like that. And they and anybody else WO wants to has the right to criticize this story. You should read the rules for this site. You obviously didn't read them the first time.
Wishfull-star chapter 11 . 5/2
that was a great chapter and I can't wait for whatever happens next:)
Cheyenne Davis chapter 10 . 4/25
Yes Dumbledore needs to pay for what he did to the Malfoy Family.
Cheyenne Davis chapter 9 . 4/25
I'm glad that Harry is now with his true family. But I hope that everything will go okay for him/her.
natasha.jones.1654 chapter 10 . 3/24
Yes! I bloody love this. Please write more. Keep up the excellent writing.
Karrie chapter 6 . 2/12
I kind of feel bad for Dumbledore. Not!
Wishfull-star chapter 10 . 1/2
that was a great chapter and I can't wait for more:) Happy New Year:)
yukino76 chapter 10 . 1/1
yeah make him pay
Misticshay24 chapter 10 . 1/1
I love this it is good cant wait to see how you go forward writing it.
yukino76 chapter 9 . 1/1
good
Wishfull-star chapter 9 . 12/31/2016
that was a sad but great chapter and I can't wait for more:)
breannapierson1990 chapter 3 . 12/31/2016
it is a really good start to a great story,though I did notice that there are some grammatical errors in it. exampleinstead of saying "he had done nothing" you could put 'he didn't do anything' .
AnetteRuby chapter 9 . 12/31/2016
completed not compleated...
You used the expression "see what the fates brought us" twice very close to one another...it doesn't sound good
You need descriptions...of the personages you use, of the places they're in...
I am not criticizing you, I am giving you pointers of what could help you improve.
Enjoy writing!
AnetteRuby chapter 8 . 12/31/2016
your writing improved a lot...
blackangel150 chapter 8 . 12/29/2016
Poor child.. Dumbledore is going down
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