Reviews for Till Death Do We Part
Guest chapter 7 . 7/12/2017
I can't read this story anymore it may be well written but you have destroyed Vegeta's character I don't mean to flame but smoking and attempting suicide is something Vegeta would never do it just felt entirely unnecessary also yeah he might call Bulma a wench or a harpy but I don't think he would ever call her a "bitch" or "whore" I really wish you wrote this story with all oc's or explained that everyone was ooc in the summary or something because no offence but you completely destroyed Vegeta's character. I'm sorry but I really wish I never started reading this.
depasa chapter 12 . 1/3/2017
you just completely ruined vegeta and his character, and we both know,i know that vegeta wouldn't call bull ALL of those things, sure stupid, imbecile, but whore and bitch? this is getting out of the line, smoking? vegeta would never smoke, cut himself? sorry you just blew it
Kaci chapter 32 . 6/10/2016
You are such a talented writer. Keep up the good work. Btw your story had me in tears!
Fitia Link chapter 2 . 5/2/2016
For the English scene, I think it has less to do with Vegeta being smart and more because the school is stupid.
Prl16 chapter 32 . 4/23/2016
I liked how they started hating each other and then love happened.
Princess Vegetita Saiyan chapter 32 . 3/5/2016
awwww! That was nice & short
Random Girl chapter 10 . 12/21/2015
I'm reading the reviews, and some of you appear to say that the story is pretty dark sometimes. You know, Vegeta's back story and all. Read "Homeless Boy" or "Rediscovering Honour". His back story just makes you want to cry for him every day. It's beyond dark.
Random Girl chapter 1 . 12/20/2015
Normally, I would complain that the characters are all in school, but this is to entertaining! But I think ain't would be a lot more in character for Vegeta to just walk out of class.
Guest chapter 31 . 12/9/2015
Love this story ! I will be on my fave list
P.S. 18 should have a job as a fortune teller!
fangurlsrule chapter 2 . 9/17/2015
I just wanted to review and let you know that I liked your story and am greatly looking forward to the sequel
vvink chapter 32 . 8/5/2015
Yey! Finally finished after 2 nights of non-stop reading!
I actually thought this story would be a tragedy with the title "till Death do we part" and the whole "He's Dead" thing in chapter 27, but all i can say is that it was a very very good read!

Btw the you have a way of picking just the right song that compliments scenes in the story perfectly. It's totally devastating my emotions hahaha!

Thank you for the very good read!
Guest chapter 27 . 7/20/2015
No vegeta :'(((
Chioma chapter 32 . 6/27/2015
this was an amazing story. It connected with me personally and I love the end. This story touched my heart brought me to tears, made me laugh this is by far one of the best stories I read. Good luck and keep being successful because you are very talented.
Vegeta luvr chapter 1 . 10/6/2014're not anti gay are you because I can't stand derogatory terms for's my email to respond
Rose chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
I don't know what to say...I don't think I liked it yet I think I do. Some of the story if I have to say was very dark and disturbing that it really made me uncomfortable but yet I have to say the rest of it was very well thought out and was touching and especially the ending...I felt so heartbroken and this is the first fanfic which has gotten to me, I cried through most bits and again especially the ending and still am as I write this and it really didn't help as I was listening to the song Photograph by Ed Sheeran covered by Chester see and that's how it got to me. You have a very good way to capture the reader attention :)
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