Reviews for The Wolf Within
Lucybell0275 chapter 76 . 7/21
I just started reading a few days ago, but I'm excited to read more! It's been a month, I hope there is an ending to the story. I'm waiting so patiently :) you're doing a great job. Very nice story. Loved the lemons! Jake and Bells forever!
Debbie Hicks chapter 76 . 7/1
Seventy-Seven
BPOV Then as all of ALIEEN VULCAN RATTLESNAKES MAULED ME WITH B EST FRIENDS Four with the Tyjree then he fled then wass c aptured you die with her you expousred of us theen EEEEX ECUTED Mauled more as all of then CHAINED Thios one exposed herself V EEENOM IZED By killing me wityh him kidn apped n ever return ed forced as Slaves b reeding on es then Blood stolen diede to Volterra, Itasly then were sen ten c ed to death then too laate With eeight Shiftpires then DRAINED BLOOD Wewere Alley left for dead with ass all of Crissss/c rosed scarsss then wasa far too m uch man y morer awaken ed a Goddess was Bellona Goddes of Starfleet Comman ds and the most rightous but Glorious Un ited Federation of Plan ets De[part b y Im palemen The Godss/Goddes doomed us/four gasthererde more C reassted a SsAilor guardian/Knight fam ily of fighters honed our Planetary ablities Destroyed b y them Ven om was Trapped b ut cursed us/them m,yself was still defen d protecting us/them ABlazing frereeely we found her train ing them butkilled her but the three foujnd herr dead without life weere next with them she was Bitten too late then found in Alaska then Chained theeen MURDERED! Heads tore frely then were pun ished now stuggleds wiyth the thirst an d diet theeen ATOMIZED! forbidden thenbrought here were in fact BURNING! ALICE! BELLA"ssssTURN EDE OHY GOD Too late was deying from the both Alice she ischanged then too late into time/space the Ven om spread then wasa not livig them so they Alicer then aPIERCED From here then Fled from hereb rought here cursed was Doomed to WEalk on my Homeworld as a Cold One curserd forever deceased with as all of them then Tore frelyb rought there now was Immortal by now was a Cursed Bitter Immortality fully complately but officaslly time shattsered then from the very as all of itwsas Icy cold-skinned then bodies brought were ass all of most as asll of more monstrous as asll odm azillion s nuked from here urgh my head then suddenly OW!Bells you better hunt thast We did so they as all mof most more as all of them as all of animals dried asa all of blood to replace then in time and space then had b ecom e more ton ed and Athletic butfit then too lasste asa all of animals an d clothersa/b oth then sudden ly ov erdrieds as all of it then SMASHED! No lon ger humans were as all of them then too late to around the weorld's animals dried up then nuked gained Fiery yellow eyes the hairs were darker as before the each both taken from here asa all of them suddenly toom late was not aliv e was cursed to wander was with as all young then blew frely with more smashed bring them as all of them then found us/them PIERCED! Then fornidden to see them blowen from here with both wityh us/them howling tore from herre Unasble to se human s at all brought here good b asnished from lands from Earth then too late with five exiled aboard yes Masters they are drain ed good then too late forbidden to step gfoot then nuked as all of most as all of them frozen but drown ed then were as all of them b ring them here they are reccently deceased then took from here lives as all of them by as all of themnever crosed over but too late myself Said the Intcantion: I Through I to Be Wary I Venture to be Someplace Scary I TURN LOOSE! GHOSTLY HAUNTINGS! BEETLEJUICE BEETLEJUICE BEETLEJUICE! IT'S SHOWTIME! Thunder roaring then lo and behol;d a Hostly place for depasrted now both were dead from each tree with more followed n ow too laste were in fact their agents made a deal to haunt once a halloween night thenn uked frely brought here now too late bound here but unable to return now Vampires weere slaughtererd of us/them joined us/them now as Kindred/Galactic Lycans were creasted nukeds frely were unable to be killed b ut unable to die at all but nuked freely by them but were Immortal bein gs as all of them wereextinct what they are dried up free as all of them n ow were unable to be old were Ancient b y now ethe oldest ones ruling then werein fact warriors train ed/taught here but not mortals at all anymore were as all of them
marleemiller5769 chapter 76 . 6/25
Awww that sucks gor bella.
Peacelovefairy chapter 76 . 6/25
Oh wow
silkyjacob chapter 76 . 6/25
We want Sue! Renee is too flighty
4Gracie04 chapter 76 . 6/25
I just don't understand Renee leaving Bella right now. Maybe, she will get her affairs in order and come back. Thank you for updating! Love it!
CanadianMama chapter 76 . 6/24
So gald you posted again!
Guest chapter 76 . 6/24
Awwww...What is Her problem... Poor Bella
Xx.theWordGenius.xX chapter 76 . 6/24
We want Sue!
4Gracie04 chapter 75 . 6/17
Absolutely fantastic chapter! So sweet! Love it!
Peacelovefairy chapter 75 . 6/17
So sweet I love it
marleemiller5769 chapter 75 . 6/16
Awww
April-Showers82 chapter 75 . 6/16
Awwww!
corkykellems chapter 75 . 6/16
Yayyyyy Jakes back...Happy times ahead ? Great Update... Thanks
CanadianMama chapter 74 . 6/10
Love Paul and Leah Brilliant pair! I have really enjoyed this story and can’t wait to see what happens next!
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