Reviews for One Step Forward, Two Decades Back |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Waahhhhhh! Hermione and Severus are Fawkes parents too! AMAZING! This is my 5th time reading this story, I love it so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why would they have to expand Hogwarts for the baby boom? It’s basically a fortress of a castle that had hundreds of empty rooms |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your worldbuilding .. the time travel age regressing (? body regressing? idk the right term) concept is sometimes hard to wrap my mind around mostly because often times i find that authors (even those officially and esteemly published for profit) try to half arsedly bs their way out of it, and it severely hurts my enjoyment of the story, but you played with such a complex and hard to believe plot device well. it was consise and nothing too over the top, but it wasn't the pedestrian "because i said so". also, i adore your way of writing and the way you structure sentences and give a new life to these well loved with characters, in a way that is innovative and unique but still wonderfully believable and immersive! im barely a third of the way through this story but i loved it so much! thank you so much for writing and sharing your talents 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was skeptical at first, but now I'm interested in how this will go. I'm interested to see how Hermione's perception changes as she views the world from the eyes of a pureblood witch. Also, offering to send a howler to Snape so he would feel like part of uer family was funny and adorable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have never read a story fanfic as long as yours and I'm so glad i have found your story. it is enchanting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi. Sorry. I don't know if you will respond to my comment or not but I have some questions. Is this chapter related to the 2009 dinner with Harry part in chapter 17? I love the story. I read the story many times but kinda confused. In chapter 17 mentioned that Teddy as Remus' son while here in Chapter 50 Remus have 2 children but no Teddy in the Daily Prophet list. One more, Severus and Hermione have 4 children here in Chapter 50 but only 2 mentioned in Chapter 17. So is it still the same timeline for both chapter? Did I missed something in between these chapters? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is like my 8th time reading this one and i love it just as mich if not more than the first |
![]() ![]() ![]() i have not yet started reading this chapter but if the autor is reading this if your dream is to write please do so I'll be first in line |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are one of my favorite authors! I love your stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh well done! I love vacationing in your head! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I completely forgot I share a birthday with Snape. So, Happy birthday us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed your story. |
![]() ![]() The kindness shown in this story sets it above the usual cliches of pranks and petty humiliation, I'm enjoying it very much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of my favorite stories. I read it over again every few months! |
![]() ![]() I have read, and bookmarked, many of your stories - I am still working through reading more of them - but this may be the most original one yet! Many fanfics involve Ron's jealousy, and many have set Hermione into the Marauders era, but none before this have used Ron's jealousy to time-shift Hermione. And none before this have made Tom to be Ariana's lover, or Lord V the vengeful shade of Tom. Many fanfics include an evil Albus, but none before this have made him a time-shifter or a thief of phoenix eggs. So I heartily salute your creativity! |