Reviews for One Step Forward, Two Decades Back
flashingreeneyes chapter 44 . 9/21
This was were i got confused. From this condition ti later on. How did that change? Im being vague as to not spoil a new reader’s experience.
flashingreeneyes chapter 43 . 9/20
Pwahahahaha! Gotta give extra love for that one
Kat Holmes chapter 1 . 9/17
Love Phoenix stories. Ron deserved more punishment though. Lol
flashingreeneyes chapter 18 . 9/15
Really, I don’t care if your stories are this or that . . . just as long as you KEEP WRITING! I absolutely LOVE your stories!
Amber chapter 50 . 9/4
I’m truly impressed that someone who doesn’t write for a living managed to write an epic novel in about six months! This was a terrific story; of course if anyone could go back in time and fix everything, it would be Hermione. And your version of Orion Black just may be my favorite fanfic character of all time! Well, after Hermione and Severus, of course:-) I loved the phoenix chicks and wish I could adopt a couple of them.
You gave us an impressively evil Dumbledore this time around. The Time Room was pure genius; AUs on top of AUs. I’m glad canon Severus got to live and find happiness with a version of Hermione, and that another version of SS and HG also got their happy ending. And Ron was the same Ron I love to hate. It must have really been wonderful for Professor Hermione to meet him as a child and know all of his tricks; he couldn’t get away with anything in her class (or Snape’s, or Lupin’s...). And Lupin had much better childhood, with a couple of friendly birds to help him through his transformations.
This may be the longest fanfic I’ve come across, and definitely one of the best I’ve ever read.
WHYBERD chapter 50 . 8/27
Brilliant, I’m so glad I gave this a chance. I loved how the characters developed, and the ending was extremely satisfying. Definitely worth the read.
20000 WPM chapter 50 . 8/5
Very interesting story. Thanks for sharing.
KitchenDancer chapter 40 . 8/3
You gave me allergies. Yup. Alergies. Thats why im leaking.
20000 WPM chapter 40 . 8/2
Lily is seriously getting on my nerves with her unwillingness to listen to friends trying to help her.
20000 WPM chapter 34 . 8/1
Well I didn't want her with Lucius anyway, but that was just horrible. You really made the depth of their evil easy to see. You managed to give Malfoy Sr what he deserved and take out Bella and a Hourcrux! I thought the part about one person in each generation being something blessed by magic was very interesting. I guess it was Sirus Grim before. It makes me wonder if he will have a different animagus form now.
20000 WPM chapter 11 . 7/30
I know you have already completed this, but I think James turning from his less than stellar ways earlier would work well with the story. Remus and Severus are already different than how they were and we are not half way through the first year. Sirius is different too. I think it would play well with the story for him to not be such a prejudiced bully for six years.
Foolgod chapter 48 . 7/14
this story is very long. The descriptions are very well detailed almost too well detailed. The time line is very wonky like sometimes there timeskips mid chapter and while there is a date that states when they are it is not always clear because nothing really changes so for most of the school life times I just didn't know how old they are. in fact now that I think about it I don't know how old they are supposed to be right now anyway. The time shenanigans is interesting but very confusing. I don't really get the prison thing and how that worked. seems like the reality should have collapsed.
there are a lot of AU elements that theorize different things that are very interesting with like the whole Tom thing and Grindelwald thing. the animals in this story are overpowered. they just solve everything which I thing is neat.
HetaPhiPuffPrincess chapter 44 . 6/21
Be still my beating heart! I don’t know if I can handle moody in love! Bless your soul for this!
Hawthornbranch chapter 43 . 6/17
Wonderful AU, which I'm enjoying tremendously. The lintballs are adorable, Orion is awesome, and I love how so many characters, like Argus and Mrs Norris have been given the opportunity to have happier lives.

I just have one small complaint. Why did you have to pick on poodles? Standard Poodles are intelligent, loving, protective and have a great sense of humor.

Unfortunately, a SMALL percentage of them also have really goofy looking haircuts thanks to their owners, who choose to display them in dog shows.

Granted, historically when they were being used as hunting dogs for water retrieval, the funny looking haircut was practical. Sadly, now all it does is make a wonderful companion into the butt of too many jokes.

In fact, many poodles in perfectly normal haircuts can be seen participating in agility competitions and are quite serious contenders.

Please, in your future writing, resist the urge to poke fun at the poor poodle who is an unwilling fashion victim of dog show rules, judges and owners. Instead, perhaps consider the Pekingese, who can be far more villainous in nature and temperament.

Finally, i would like to thank you for sharing your inspiration, effort, time and talents with us, your grateful readers.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/4
Is Regulus’s seal the sickle as in for harvesting grain or the wizarding coin?
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