Reviews for Child of Lightning |
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Guest chapter 46 . 9/29 this was a great story but needs more chapters |
stillfreeleader chapter 28 . 7/31 Youre Iron Man 2 is all out of order. The court scene was the beginning of the movie, and Nat was part of Stark industries before the Monaco race because she was IN Monaco when that happened. If this is on purpose maybe make a note so the reader knows? Otherwise it just seems messy. |
stillfreeleader chapter 21 . 7/30 My only issue with this story so far is that you keep implying that dumbledore didnt want harry to know about the magical world. I dont believe that the whole letter he gave to the dursleys was ever told to the readers however i do not think that was part of it. He did say out loud though to Mcgonagall that he didnt want Harry raised in the magical world because of the instant fame he was given. In original canon it was the Dursleys that didnt want Harry to know about the magical world. Perhaps its just a change you made but its being inferred based on a letter that you, like rowling, havent let the readers well read. So for all we know its the same letter as canon. |
zuleandris chapter 46 . 11/9/2023 Todavía espero el siguiente capítulo |
divawife chapter 25 . 9/11/2023 Loving this. I'm a huge fan of stories that are a brand new brainchild. I hope you update soon. In reading this for the second time. |
Cata chapter 25 . 8/27/2023 I think hermione and krum would be perfect for each other when he comes along |
N1605 chapter 46 . 8/20/2023 Loving this plot ! Can’t wait to see what happens next. |
DrollPaladin chapter 15 . 8/6/2023 Cellphones weren’t all that portable until the 2000s |
aiatin chapter 46 . 7/18/2023 I hope you will still update. I've been waiting. I also hope you're doing alright |
dreaminggirllivi2 chapter 46 . 5/28/2023 I hope you haven't abandoned this story. I have reread it multiple time and I would love for it to continue. |
aiatin chapter 1 . 4/11/2023 I hope you will still update huhuhu |
Hermione24 chapter 46 . 4/5/2023 I have been following this story for a long time and I have loved it from the start. I am so hoping you will get back to this story and update it. Please please please... |
patty.clark.792 chapter 14 . 3/14/2023 WHOOOOOO HOOOOOO, Oh Boy Howdy. This chapter is FUN... |
patty.clark.792 chapter 12 . 3/14/2023 YaaaaaY Reg is back! |
Guest chapter 46 . 2/19/2023 I love your Story. I hope you keep writing. |