Reviews for Child of Lightning |
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nate-king chapter 38 . 6/2/2020 This is a very interesting (more than just interesting!) spin for the series, author-san! |
nate-king chapter 34 . 6/2/2020 BAMF Amelia! Nice chapter! Also, I was reminded last night of the casualties of the Infinity War and Mann does my heart ache for them, for these children... Kudos, as always! |
nate-king chapter 33 . 6/2/2020 *whistles* It's crazy how you guys think up these things! Just. Crazy. Brilliant. I look forward to the next Arc! 3 Kudos! |
nate-king chapter 23 . 6/2/2020 Awesome! I'm excited to see what you'll do about Luna coming in earlier! |
nate-king chapter 12 . 6/2/2020 Ooohhh, is regulus going to be petunia's other half later? This was very well-written! I'm glad to be rereading it~ |
WilliamAD chapter 24 . 5/28/2020 Hoping a Hermione/Peter slash romance for this! ;3 If possible. . . |
oceanfirequeen2.0 chapter 43 . 5/5/2020 I'm very much in love with this story and can't wait for the next update! |
Flying Flitwicks chapter 24 . 4/22/2020 This will be my last chapter for a while. 1. While I know that Hermione is a half blood/demigod/half – reallyyy, half Tasha and half Thor – she's too mature for her own good. Everyone is too mature if I were to be honest. 2. Most chapters need a runthrough as well. Your paragraphs often repeat its meaning, e.g. a character will ponder over a specific topic/feeling/idea in the span of 5-6 paragraphs. I don't mind it if an author maps out a character's feelings — but when it stays on the same note, path, page or whatever you'd prefer to call it then maybe it would be better to have those extra paragraphs taken down. Normally, I would've dropped this story hours before writing this review. However, your unique ideas pushed me to continue on reading until ch24. I know I'll pick this up again. I could only hope that the recent chapters are more pleasant than the older one. I hope you're staying safe x |
Flying Flitwicks chapter 16 . 4/21/2020 I'm a bit apprehensive on how you painted James, Lily, Sirius and the Slytherins. Ah, regarding the kidnapping incident - if only Emma/Tasha had a way to communicate w Dan/Thor eh? |
Flying Flitwicks chapter 12 . 4/21/2020 OH MY GOODNESS. Why? Why is he here? Ah, I'm truly excited! It's 6 am now |
Flying Flitwicks chapter 10 . 4/21/2020 Aagh! Emma and Petunia should just live together and run away from their husbands! |
Flying Flitwicks chapter 2 . 4/21/2020 Oh goodness, this is so interesting! |
DidIStepOnYourMoment45 chapter 43 . 4/19/2020 Please update! I really need more of this story, I absolutely love it! |
orangeoctapus chapter 43 . 4/18/2020 Fantastically imaginative and fun, can't wait to read the next chapter! |
Guest chapter 43 . 4/14/2020 This is awesome! I'm curious if we will see Natasha go all mama bear like when hermione was 4. |