Reviews for Retribution |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Best ending to a chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story. Excited for another update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really though, the Weasleys just can't catch a break. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't really have anything that comes to mind after reading this chapter? Just reviewing for the extra boost it'll give. |
![]() ![]() ![]() God, that was so awkward in the beginning of that scene, I LOVE IT. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're not the only weakling here, because DAMN. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AYY, get it, Hermione! She still doesn't realize that this is just a bit more hellish for her than it is for George, does she? I love Freds support going on though. Really great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that Fred is being so, proactive? Is that the right word? About this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That lucky, lucky badger. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, so when you write scenes where the male is doing a thing with his penis, do you do research to fin out how they actually feel when they do their thing or is this just purely fiction no one knows how a guy does what he does? I need to find a guy I can ask my questions to, jeez. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hermione Granger and the Wandering Hands. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh nooo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soooo happy. Sorry it took me a whole day to review. Had computer problems and I HATE reviewing from my phone. I love the tension in this chapter and I positively adored Sirius and how you wrote him in this chapter. It was perfection. Oh, the end. The end. I adore it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was bloody hot, that's what it was Granger, live a little! Honestly that would be a great answer if George hadnt looked so horrified. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I misread "snitchnipping" as "nipsnitching" and, of course, had a nice giggle over it. |